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9．圖示作文：這是劉明上周日在公園發(fā)生的事情，請根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容寫一篇文章．
提示詞：run after a goat； get lost
作文要求：1、話題作文或圖示作文任選其一．
2、要求字跡工整，語法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
3、話題作文字?jǐn)?shù)要求為80----100 詞；圖示作文字?jǐn)?shù)要求為80詞左右．
Last Sunday，Liu Ming and his friends went for a picnic at the foot of the mountain．Some of them were playing games，some were dancing，they felt very relaxed．Suddenly，Liu Ming saw a goat running．He was interested in it and began to run after it for a long time．When he thought of his friends，he didn't know where he was．He got lost．At that time，a farmer came．With his help，Liu Ming found his friends again．He thanked the farmer and said"Goodbye"to him．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫作文．內(nèi)容根據(jù)圖畫所描述劉明上周日在公園發(fā)生的事情，寫一篇文章．時態(tài)為一般過去時．人稱為第三人稱．寫作要點包括：1．上周末，劉明和他的朋友們在公園玩；2．劉明看到一只山羊跑過，追了過去；3．劉明迷路了；4．在農(nóng)民的幫助下找到了他的朋友們．常用的重點句型和短語：go for a picnic，be interested in，for a long time，get lost，at that time，with one's help等．

解答 Last Sunday，Liu Ming and his friends went for a picnic at the foot of the mountain．Some of them were playing games，some were dancing，they felt very relaxed．Suddenly，Liu Ming saw a goat running．He was interested in it and began to run after it for a long time．When he thought of his friends，he didn't know where he was．He got lost．At that time，a farmer came．With his help，Liu Ming found his friends again．He thanked the farmer and said"Goodbye"to him．

點評 這是一篇圖畫作文．該類作文寫作之前，考生需仔細(xì)觀察圖畫內(nèi)容，了解事情發(fā)生的大概，一般說來，所給的幾幅圖都是圍繞一個中心展開的．它們講述的通常是一個小故事或小事件，這個小故事或小事件就是這組圖畫所要表達(dá)的中心．再根據(jù)題目要求描述每一幅圖畫的內(nèi)容，并使文章大意連貫，故事情節(jié)完整，符合邏輯及英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．同時也需注意字跡工整，語法正確，