Question

假如你是王明，你將代表學(xué)校參加郴州市屮學(xué)生英詁演講比賽。演講的題目是 We should help parents do housework. 請你用英誥寫一篇演講稿。
要點提示：

現(xiàn) 象	你常做的家務(wù)	你的體會和看法
許多學(xué)生懶悄，不愿做家務(wù)。	◆ 修理床鋪 ◆ 澆花 ◆ 打掃房間 ◆ 倒垃圾 ◆……	…… (至少兩點）

參考詞匯: lazy, chores, make the bed, water flowers, clean the room, take out the trash, relaxing, interesting, proud, pleased, duty
要求：1.短文須包含要點提示中的所有信息，并可適當發(fā)揮；  2. 80詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)； 3.文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實姓名、校名和地名。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning! I’m Wang Ming. It’s my honor to give you a speech. My topic is We should help parents do housework.______________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for your listening!

Answer 1

One possible version:
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning! I’m Wang Ming It’s my honor to give you a speech. My topic is We should help parents do housework. Now many students are too lazy to do housework. But I think we should help parents do some housework because they are busy with their work and tired after work. 1 often help my parents do many chores. In the morning, I will make the bed and water flowers. They are relaxing and interesting In the evening, I often clean the room and take out the trash. When 1 see the tidy room, 1 feel proud of myself. My parents are pleased with me. 1 think it’s our duty to help our parents with some chores.

試題分析：這是一篇圖表類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化，尤其是數(shù)字的不同表達法。
點評：本文屬于圖表類作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。