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5．英語是一門交際的工具．為了提高中學(xué)生的英語口語水平，紹興每年都舉行一次中學(xué)生英語口語演講比賽．對于這項活動，不同的學(xué)生有不同的看法．請根據(jù)下列調(diào)查表，描述同學(xué)們的想法，并談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?br />要求：1．短文須包括表格中所有信息，可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
2．詞數(shù)在100字左右，文章的開頭已給出，不記入總詞數(shù)．

60%同學(xué)贊成	40%同學(xué)反對	你的看法
1．可以提高英語口語技能	1．平時口語訓(xùn)練少，怕犯錯誤，被同學(xué)們嘲笑	…
2．變得開朗、自信	2．壓力過大，對自己沒信心
3．交到更多的朋友	3．…

In order to improve students'speaking skills，there is an English speech contest for middle school students in Shaoxing every year．Here is a survey about what students think of the English speech contest．60% of the students like the contest．They think taking part in the contest can improve our speaking skills．Besides，it can make us more outgoing so that we can make more friends，maybe we will become really confident．
However，different students have different ideas.40% of the students have disagreements．They are afraid to make mistakes and they are worried about being laughed at by other students．Another thing that they find difficult is that they are under too much pressure，they are not confident enough．They have so much homework to do that they have little time to practice speaking English．
In my opinion，it's good for us to take part in it．We can not only learn much knowledge but also learn how to face challenges．As the saying goes，nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是描述同學(xué)們對中學(xué)生英語口語演講比賽的想法，并談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ畷r態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1.60%同學(xué)贊成；可以提高英語口語技能，變得開朗、自信，交到更多的朋友
2.40%同學(xué)反對；平時口語訓(xùn)練少，怕犯錯誤，被同學(xué)們嘲笑．壓力過大，對自己沒信心
3．你的看法
常用到的重點短語：
take part in參加
make friends 交朋友
be afraid to do sth 害怕做某事
make mistakes 犯錯誤
not only…but also…不僅…而且…
【高分句型】
1．Besides，it can①make us more outgoing②so that we can make more friends，maybe we will become really confident．
①make sb+adj 讓某人怎樣
②so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句．
2．Another thing①that they find difficult is ②that they are under too much pressure，they are not confident enough．
①that作為引導(dǎo)詞的定語從句，that作為從句的賓語，修飾先行詞thing．
②that引導(dǎo)的從句做表語，與is構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)．
3．We can①not only learn much knowledge but also learn②how to face challenges．
①not only…but also…不僅…而且…連接兩個對等成分．
②疑問詞+to do 作為learn的賓語．

解答 In order to improve students'speaking skills，there is an English speech contest for middle school students in Shaoxing every year．Here is a survey about what students think of the English speech contest．60% of the students like the contest．They think taking part in the contest can improve our speaking skills．Besides，it can make us more outgoing so that we can make more friends，maybe we will become really confident．【高分句型】（60%同學(xué)贊成）
However，different students have different ideas.40% of the students have disagreements．They are afraid to make mistakes and they are worried about being laughed at by other students．Another thing that they find difficult is that they are under too much pressure，they are not confident enough．【高分句型】They have so much homework to do that they have little time to practice speaking English．（40%同學(xué)反對）
In my opinion，it's good for us to take part in it．We can not only learn much knowledge but also learn how to face challenges．【高分句型】As the saying goes，nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it．（我的看法）

點評 這是一篇圖表給出材料的作文，圖表中給出的材料較為豐富，考生在寫作時，圖表內(nèi)容必須包括在內(nèi)．在自己的觀點部分，考生需要自己適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮，建議考生在平時的英語學(xué)習(xí)中積累一些常用到的重點句型和短語，出彩的發(fā)揮會給文章增色不少．