Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（滿分15分）

根據(jù)下面表格中的要點(diǎn)，以Be Thankful 為題寫一篇作文。

感謝的對象	感謝的理由	如何感謝
父母	給予生命….	……..
老師	教誨我們
朋友	給予我們友誼….
社會	…..

注意：1. 詞數(shù)80詞左右；開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。

2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。

Be Thankful

Since we were born , many people have help us a lot . We are supposed to express thanks to them .

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Answer 1

【答案】

Since we were born, many people have helped us a lot. We are supposed to express thanks to them. First of all , we should thank our parents, who gave us lives and brought us up with love and care while never ask for payment. We also need to say thanks to our teachers. With their help, we open our eyes and learn much knowledge. They help us to grow healthily and happily. And remember to say thanks to our friends, who always understand us so well and are ready to help us out of troubles. In addition, we have to give our thanks to the society. It offers us many things that we need during our growth. Then, how to express our thanks for them? I think the best way is to become a useful person and help others. Only in this way can we pay them back.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇文章圍繞感恩而寫， 內(nèi)容包括對父母，老師，朋友和社會的感激，以及如何去感謝。文章可以用第一人稱，和一般現(xiàn)在時。寫作時要注意要點(diǎn)的完整性，每一個要點(diǎn)不必寫得太詳細(xì)，但都要包括。文章可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞和承接性的句子，加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性和緊湊性。在表達(dá)感謝時刻嘗試使用不同的表達(dá)方式，避免單詞和句式的單一性。

寫作亮點(diǎn)： 這篇文章要點(diǎn)齊全，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流暢，是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。文中使用了一些連接詞，例如First of all首先，also也，and和，In addition另外，Then然后，等等，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)非常分明。另外，文中用了一些復(fù)合句，F(xiàn)irst of all , we should thank our parents, who gave us lives and brought us up with love and care while never ask for payment. And remember to say thanks to our friends, who always understand us so well and are ready to help us out of troubles. 兩個句子都包含了定語從句。另外一些特殊句式Only in this way can we pay them back.是一個倒裝句。