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書面表達（滿分 20分）
現(xiàn)在越來越多的人在網(wǎng)上購物，網(wǎng)購（Internet Shopping）已成為流行趨勢，而網(wǎng)購的利弊也成為人們討論的熱點，請以“Internet Shopping”為題，參考下面的信息，并結(jié)合自己的觀點寫一篇英語短文，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。詞數(shù)90左右，短文已給出部分不計入總數(shù)。

Advantages	Disadvantages
1. 方便(convenient)，可以在家買東西，不受時間限制。 2. 有很大的商品信息 3. 可以買到當(dāng)?shù)貨]有的商品。 4. 價格便宜。	1. 買貨容易，退貨難。 2. 實物（material object）和圖片有差距。 3. 網(wǎng)絡(luò)支付不安全。

 
注意：1. 短文應(yīng)包括所給內(nèi)容要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章連貫；
2. 詞數(shù)90左右，短文開頭已給出，不計總詞數(shù)；
3. 文中不得提及考生所在的學(xué)校及自己的姓名；
Internet Shopping
Now Internet Shopping is more and more popular in the world.
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
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Answer 1

One possible version:
Now Internet Shopping is more and more popular in the world.
It’s a new way of shopping. It has lots of advantages. The most important is convenient. You can shop whenever you like because the online shop are open 24 hours a day. It is often to buy goods and it is also easy to find the things that you can’t buy in the shop. And they are cheaper. Besides, we can learn lots of information about
goods.
But “Every coin has two sides. ” So is Internet shopping. You can’t see the material objects or check their quality. Usually the pictures are more beautiful than the goods. So when we get the goods and don’t like them, they sometimes are not easy to give back. What’s more, it’s not safe to pay through the internet. So we should be careful when we shop on the internet.

試題分析：本文屬于陳述正反方觀點的議論文作文，主題是網(wǎng)上購物的優(yōu)缺點。要求中只給出了要點，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。要求中已經(jīng)給出了部分提示，動筆先應(yīng)先認真閱讀提示，確定寫作內(nèi)容。寫作中注意表達觀點時的常用句式，注意在表達不同觀點時，連詞的使用。內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣。
點評：做英語書面表達時，只要注意認真審題，分析體裁，確定時態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復(fù)合句。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤。