Question

提示：在每個(gè)人的成長(zhǎng)過程中，有些因素對(duì)人的成長(zhǎng)具有重要的作用。如，一樁事、一件物、一個(gè)人、一段經(jīng)歷、一次體驗(yàn)……。請(qǐng)你就其中的一個(gè)進(jìn)行描述，與大家分享。
要求：內(nèi)容切題、語句通順、意思連貫、字跡清楚。
（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）

Answer 1

I used to be a naughty boy and my mother used to be angry with me. Now I’d like to say I’ve changed a lot. In fact, all is because of my mother’s diaries.
One day I saw my mother’s diary book by accident while I was looking for my notebook. I was curious and began to read my mother’s diaries. In her diaries, she showed her deep love for me. She a because of lso expressed her disappointment when I made mistakes. She said she loved me so much and she believed I could be a good boy. I couldn’t help crying after reading my mother’s diaries.
Since that day, I have changed a lot. I work hard and share some housework. I also try to understand my mother’s feelings.

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。本文從成長(zhǎng)過程中意外看到母親的日記知道母親對(duì)自己的愛和失望，從此作者想改變自己。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文記述了作者成長(zhǎng)中的一次經(jīng)歷和怎樣使自己改變。本文用到了一些固定的詞組because of由于……的原因，began to do開始去做某事，I have changed a lot.這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。