Question

假如你是李華，就個(gè)人愛(ài)好帶來(lái)的困惑給英國(guó)朋友Stephen發(fā)電子郵件進(jìn)行交流并請(qǐng)求幫助。要點(diǎn)如下：

李華	愛(ài)好	對(duì)太空旅行感興趣；經(jīng)常到圖書(shū)館閱讀資料
	困惑	得不到父母理解
	觀點(diǎn)	1.個(gè)人愛(ài)好有助于學(xué)習(xí)；2. ……(至少一點(diǎn))
父母	觀點(diǎn)	時(shí)間應(yīng)花在功課上；成績(jī)(good marks)就是一切

注意：1. 詞數(shù): 80個(gè)左右（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出的內(nèi)容不記入總詞數(shù)）；
2. 內(nèi)容必須包括上表中的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯；
3. 條理清楚、語(yǔ)句連貫；   4．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名。
Dear Stephen,
I am writing to tell you about my problem with my parents. I don’t know how to deal with it and would like your help.
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What shall I do? Can you offer me some suggestions? I am looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Stephen,
I am writing to tell you about my problem with my parents. I don’t know how to deal with it and would like your help.
You know I am crazy about space travel. In my spare time I often go to the library to find something about space travel to read. This makes my parents very angry. To them, good marks are everything and I should spend more time on my lessons, even at weekends.
I think healthy hobbies are helpful for our studies. If I can achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobby, it will be of great value to my future development. But I don’t think my parents understand me. I feel bad about that.
What shall I do? Can you offer me some suggestions? I am looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes
Li Hua

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