Question

【題目】假如你叫楊晨，你的美國筆友Tim目前正在學(xué)習(xí)中文。在學(xué)習(xí)中文的過程中，他遇到了下面一些困難，如下表所示，請你用英語給他寫一封郵件，給Tim一些學(xué)習(xí)中文的建議。

困難	建議
上課聽不懂老師講的話	1. 可以讓老師放慢語速
	2. 通過看中文電影和聽中文歌曲來提高聽力
不懂一些中文的特殊表達	通過大量閱讀中文書來了解這些特殊表達

要求：1. 必須包括全部要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2. 80詞左右。

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tim，

I'm sorry to hear that you have some trouble in learning Chinese. But it doesn't matter. I believe I can help you.

First，it's difficult for you to understand what your Chinese teacher says in class. In my opinion，you should tell your teacher about it so that she can speak more slowly. On the other hand，you can try to improve your listening by watching Chinese movies and listening to Chinese songs.

Second，you find there are some special expressions and you can't understand them. I think you can learn about them by reading lots of Chinese books. The more you read，the more you can understand.

I think the best way to learn a language is to use it. It's my secret when I learn English. So try to use Chinese as often as possible.

I hope my suggestions can help you.

Yours，

Yang Chen

【解析】本篇作文屬于材料作文，主要向你的美國筆友Tim提一些學(xué)習(xí)中文的建議。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。

【亮點說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用了時態(tài)語態(tài)和主謂一致，特別是一些亮點詞句，如I am sorry to hear that, have trouble in doing sth, in my opinion, on the other hand, the+比較級，as often as possible等，增加了邏輯關(guān)系，增強了上下文的意思連貫性，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順。