Question

20．在父親節(jié)（6月16日）來臨之際，請你根據(jù)下表提供的信息寫一篇以"My father"為題的英語作文，介紹其大體情況，并談談你對父親的評價．

年齡 外貌 職業(yè)	40 又高又胖，短頭發(fā)，大眼睛 （數(shù)學）教師，（工作努力，上課活潑生動，深受學生喜愛）
性格 愛好	誠實，善良 打乒乓球

注意：
1.80詞左右．
可以適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫．
My father
My father is a40-year-old math teacher．He is tall and fat with short hair and big eyes．Healways works hard．His classes are lively and interesting and deeply loved byhis students．
My father is an honestand kind man．He often helps other children and me with our maths．
My father's hobby isplaying table tennis．We often play table tennis together at the weekends．
My father is not onlya good father but also a good friend．I have learned a lot from him．I lovemy father very much．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
He often ①helps other children and me with our maths．他經(jīng)常幫助其他的孩子和我學數(shù)學．
①help sb with sth幫助某人做某事
高分句型二：
 My father is①not only a good father but also a good friend．我的父親不僅是個好父親也是一個很好的朋友．
①not only…but also…不但…而且…連接前后兩個對等的成分

解答 My father 
    My father is a 40year-old math teacher．He is tall and fat with short hair and big eyes．Healways works hard．His classes are lively and interesting and deeply loved byhis students．【介紹父親的年齡，外貌，職業(yè)等】
     My father is an honestand kind man．He often helps other children and me with our maths．【高分句型一】
     My father's hobby isplaying table tennis．We often play table tennis together at the weekends．【介紹父親的性格及愛好】
      My father is not onlya good father but also a good friend．【高分句型二】I have learned a lot from him．I lovemy father very much．

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