Question

13．假設下面是你的筆友Peter的一些信息．請根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容，寫一篇短文介紹一下他的情況．

Appearance	中等身材，戴眼鏡．
Qualities	①富有愛心（舉一例） ②勇敢（曾從火中救出一位老人）
Hero	李連杰 創(chuàng)辦了壹基金（One Foundation），從事慈善事業(yè)多年 被公認為一個超級明星，受到大家高度贊揚
Hobbies	①看體育節(jié)目（有趣）和動作片（刺激） ②閱讀偵探小說和聽鄉(xiāng)村音樂 （請補充說明原因，不少于2點）
Dream	幫助那些處于危險的動物 …．

要求：
1詞數(shù)90左右 （開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）
2短文應包括所給內(nèi)容要點，可適當發(fā)揮．
3語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整．
I'm glad to tell you something about my penfriend Peter today．             ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
His favorite star is Li Lianjie who has been engaged in philanthropy for many years．
句中"who has been engaged in philanthropy for many years"為定語從句，修飾"Li Lianjie"．這句話意為：他最喜歡的明星是從事慈善事業(yè)多年的李連杰．
高分句型二：
He wants to help the animals in danger when he grows up．
句中"when he grows up"為時間狀語從句．句中短語有："want to do sth 想做某事"、"in danger 在危險中"、"grow up 長大"．這句話意為：當他長大后，他想幫助處于危險的動物．

解答 I am very glad to introduce my best friend Peter today．
He was born on August 23，1997．He is medium height and he has round face，long nose，wears a pair of glasses．It makes him funny．【要點一，外貌】
He is kind and brave．He is ready to help others．Once he saved an old man from the fire．【要點二，品質(zhì)】
His favorite star is Li Lianjie who has been engaged in philanthropy for many years．【高分句型一】He founded One Foundation．He was recognized as a superstar and was highly praised．【要點三，最喜愛的明星】
He likes watching sports shows because he thinks they are interesting．He also likes action movies，because they are exciting．He likes reading detective novels when he is free．I think it can make me  clever．He prefers country music，because it is relaxing．【要點四，愛好】
He likes animals．He wants to help the animals in danger when he grows up．【高分句型二】【要點五，夢想】
This is my pen friend，what about yours？

點評 動筆前應先認真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語，句式等問題．注意不要遺漏要點，句子要通順連貫，沒有語法錯誤．