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         中學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間長(zhǎng)、壓力大，專家建議學(xué)生每天課后應(yīng)采取適當(dāng)?shù)姆绞椒潘勺约�。某英文�?bào)“學(xué)生習(xí) 作”專欄正在就“學(xué)生適當(dāng)?shù)姆潘煞绞健边@一話題進(jìn)行征文。假如你是二十二中初二(3) 班的一名學(xué)生，最 近你對(duì)班上同學(xué)課后放松的方式進(jìn)行了調(diào)查。請(qǐng)根 據(jù)表格提供的調(diào)查信息和要求寫一篇短文向該報(bào)投稿。

調(diào)查人數(shù)	56人(男：29人;女:27人）
常用放松方式	看電視(28人）；玩電腦游戲（10人）；聽音樂(lè) (8人）；進(jìn)行體育鍛煉(5人）;沒(méi)有時(shí)間放松 (5人）
你的觀點(diǎn)	哪種(些)放松方式是適當(dāng)?shù)�？為什么�?/p>

要求:1. 短文包含相關(guān)調(diào)查信息及你自己的觀點(diǎn)；

   2. 詞數(shù):80以上。

   4. 人稱:主要用第一人稱。

   5. 時(shí)態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

   6. 結(jié)構(gòu)提綱：

(1) 引人話題:開門見(jiàn)山，點(diǎn)明主題。

(2) 談?wù)撚^點(diǎn)：中學(xué)生常用的放松方式

   7. 語(yǔ)句儲(chǔ)備：

(1) too much pressure

(2) every student should choose proper ways to relax

(3) taking exercise is a proper way

(4) it can help improve our health 

                       The proper way(s) for students to relax

                                                                                                                                                                                                     

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                     The proper way(s) for students to relax

   I am a student of Class 3, Grade 2, No. 22 Middle School. Recently I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class.

   There are 56 students in my class (29 boys and 27 girls) . Different students have different ways to relax. Half of the students often watch TV. Ten students like to play computer games while eight enjoy listening to music. Five students think doing sports is a good way and another five are too busy to relax.

   As we study too long every day and suffer from too much pressure,every student should choose proper ways to relax. In my opinion,watching TV or playing computer games is not a proper way to help us relax. I think taking exercise is a proper way because it can rest our brains and eyes. Besides,it can help improve our health.Therefore,I often play ping-pong after class. It's really helpful to both my health and my study.