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10．請(qǐng)以Believe myself，and I will win!為題，寫一篇自己在學(xué)習(xí)或生活中遇到并戰(zhàn)勝困難的短文，跟大家分享一下你成長(zhǎng)的經(jīng)歷．
（1）寫作提示：1）你遇到過什么困難？
2）你是如何克服困難的？
3）你從此事中體會(huì)到了什么？
（2）寫作要求：
短文的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含所提示的要點(diǎn)．語言要流暢．可圍繞提示要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加情節(jié)，以使短文的意思連貫；短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名及地名；短文的詞數(shù)在90詞左右．
Believe myself，and I will win
Last night after I had my supper，I went to do my math homework．I finished all the work except the last one in half an hour，but the last one was the most difficult of all．I tried many ways，but I still couldn't work it out．An hour later，I wanted to give up．But my father told me to keep on working．I worked it out with the help of my father at last．I smiled，and so did my father．From that I know nothing in the world is impossible if I set my mind to do it，and just remember"believe myself，and I will win"，then I can overcome any difficulty．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是以Believe myself，and I will win!為題，寫一篇自己在學(xué)習(xí)或生活中遇到并戰(zhàn)勝困難的短文．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱輔以第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1）你遇到過什么困難？
2）你是如何克服困難的？
3）你從此事中體會(huì)到了什么？

常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
work out 解答出
give up 放棄
keep on doing sth 繼續(xù)做某事
with the help of sb 在某人的幫助下
set one's  mind to do 下定決心做某事

【高分句型】
1．I smiled，and so did my father．
so+助動(dòng)詞+主語，表示某人也一樣．
2．From that I know nothing in the world is impossible ①if I ②set my mind to do it，and just remember"believe myself，and I will win"，then I can overcome any difficulty．
①if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句．
②set one's  mind to do 下定決心做某事

解答 Believe myself，and I will win!
Last night after I had my supper，I went to do my math homework．I finished all the work except the last one in half an hour，but the last one was the most difficult of all．（遇到過什么困難）I tried many ways，but I still couldn't work it out．An hour later，I wanted to give up．But my father told me to keep on working．I worked it out with the help of my father at last．（如何克服困難的）I smiled，and so did my father．【高分句型】From that I know nothing in the world is impossible if I set my mind to do it，and just remember"believe myself，and I will win"，then I can overcome any difficulty．【高分句型】（體會(huì)）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 以提綱提供情景的作文．要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會(huì)造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個(gè)提綱的要點(diǎn)．行文間要注意簡(jiǎn)化描述，用簡(jiǎn)短的語句代替冗長(zhǎng)的語句．在作文完成的時(shí)候，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達(dá)清楚的要點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)．