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12．自從溫州市政府推行"違必拆，六先拆"、"兩拆兩綠"、"拆圍去丑"、"揭疤栽花"…等活動以來，相信同學(xué)們已經(jīng)發(fā)現(xiàn)溫州的變化：圍墻拆了（remove enclosing wall）、垃圾少了、綠地多了、公園多了、空氣清新了、玩的地方多了…溫州變綠了，變美了很多！
請你結(jié)合以上內(nèi)容談一談你對這些活動的看法以及你能為"美麗溫州"做些什么，可適當(dāng)拓展，寫一篇短文，字數(shù)在100左右．（注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、校名）Many changes have taken place in wenzhou．The enclosing walls were removed．There are less garbage，but more greenbelts，parks and places to play．The air is clean．Wenzhou is more and more green and beautiful．These changes are related with Wenzhou government's activities．
I'am very happy to see these changes．And I think people in this city will be more comfortable and happy，too．I suggest that everyone should pay attention to the environment．Don't throw garbage everywhere．Go to work by bus or on foot．People who do not care for the environment must do a meaningful thing as a punishment．If everyone to do so，wenzhou will become more beautiful．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
Many changes have taken place in wenzhou．在溫州發(fā)生了許多變化．
現(xiàn)在完成時構(gòu)成：have或has+done．
take place發(fā)生
句型二：
I suggest that everyone should pay attention to the environment．我建議每個人都應(yīng)該重視環(huán)境問題．
suggest+that從句．
pay attention to 重視

解答 Many changes have taken place in wenzhou．【高分句型一】The  enclosing walls were removed．There are less  garbage，but more greenbelts，parks and  places to play．The air is clean．Wenzhou is more and more green and beautiful．These changes are related with Wenzhou government's activities．（變化）
I'am very happy to see these changes．And I think people in this city will be more comfortable and happy，too．I suggest that everyone should pay attention to the environment．【高分句型二】Don't throw garbage everywhere．Go to work by bus or on foot．People who do not care for the environment must do a meaningful thing  as a punishment．（建議）If everyone to do so，wenzhou will become more beautiful．

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