Question

【題目】 假期許多同學(xué)都外出旅游，旅游不但讓我們開(kāi)闊眼界，也讓我們放松心情�！�21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)》正在開(kāi)展“快樂(lè)旅游”的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你寫一篇作文投稿，談?wù)勀汶y忘的一次旅游經(jīng)歷，包括：你什么時(shí)間去哪兒旅游了，在那兒做了什么，旅游的感受如何。

提示詞：visit, delicious, photos, scenery, exciting, enjoy, ...

提示問(wèn)題: 1. When and where did you go?

2. What did you do there?

3. What do you think of your trip?

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Answer 1

【答案】例文：

I went on a trip to Shanghai with my parents last summer holiday. We visited Yuyuan. It is a Chinese traditional building. And we enjoyed various kinds of delicious food from all over China. We had a long walk on the bund of Shanghai. There are many old tall buildings along Huangpu River. Some of them have a history of hundreds of years. We went to the landmark – the Oriental Pearl TV town. You went to the top of it to enjoy the beautiful scenery of Shanghai. We took many photos there. What an exciting trip we had in Shanghai!

【解析】

本篇為話題作文，要求按照提示完成一篇短文，講述自己的一次旅行經(jīng)歷。要求短文要包含題干所有的提示信息，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語(yǔ)言連貫，邏輯清晰。

1.題干解讀：本篇材料作文要求用第一人稱講述自己的一次旅行經(jīng)歷。講述發(fā)生過(guò)的事情，用一般過(guò)去時(shí)；文中包含什么時(shí)候去哪兒、做了什么、覺(jué)得這次旅行怎么樣；書(shū)寫時(shí)要注意文句通順，內(nèi)容完整。