Question

假如你是Simon，你住在Blue Sky City，在過(guò)去的十年里，Blue Sky City發(fā)生了巨大的變
化：馬路、環(huán)境、生活、交通……，這種變化既帶來(lái)了好處也帶來(lái)了許多麻煩……(字?jǐn)?shù)不得少于80字)
Blue Sky City: Past and present
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
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Answer 1

I’m Simon. Blue Sky City is my hometown .In the past, my hometown was very small. People used to live a poor life. The houses used to be old and small. The traffic used to be not convenient, but the mountains were greener, water much cleaner. They enjoyed a clearer sky .
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown.. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. The road is wide ,and you can find supermarkets easily.Many people have their own cars. People can take a bus or a taxi to town. But there are also many problem now The air is not as fresh as before, so are the trees.now we all know protecting the environment is very important.so we must take action to pretect our environment.
I’m sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求介紹家鄉(xiāng)的變化。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可能會(huì)用到過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)（used to do 過(guò)去常常）和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。根據(jù)提綱要求進(jìn)行描述就可以了。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文要點(diǎn)敘述全，幾乎沒(méi)有語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，句式變化靈活。語(yǔ)言豐富。例如; In the past .so are the trees. better and better,等