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11．青少年雜志社邀請(qǐng)你參加每年度的中學(xué)生寫(xiě)作競(jìng)賽，請(qǐng)以"My American friend"為題，根據(jù)所給信息完成下面的小短文． 要求：要點(diǎn)齊全，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整．

Looks	明亮大眼睛，長(zhǎng)長(zhǎng)的頭發(fā)
Personality	幽默，講滑稽笑話使人發(fā)笑，樂(lè)于助人，在公交車(chē)上讓座
School life	所有科目中最喜歡法語(yǔ)，覺(jué)得學(xué)外語(yǔ)其樂(lè)無(wú)窮，有大量的時(shí)間進(jìn)行課外活動(dòng)
A travel experience	上周，乘飛機(jī)12個(gè)小時(shí)抵達(dá)北京 參觀一些名勝古跡，了解許多中國(guó)文化
A DIY job	昨天，她和我一起裝飾我的臥室，把墻涂成藍(lán)色，張貼一些美麗的圖畫(huà)，安裝明亮的燈．我們合作得很愉快．

My American friend
Suzy is my American friend．      ．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．本文作者主要介紹自己的一個(gè)美國(guó)朋友的外表、個(gè)性、旅行經(jīng)歷等．全文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)．
高分句型：
①She often tells funny jokes and always makes people laugh．她經(jīng)常講有趣的笑話，總是使人發(fā)笑．句子中make sb do sth表示讓某人做某事，后面跟動(dòng)詞原形．
②Last week，it took her twelve hours to get to Beijing by plane．上周，她花了十二個(gè)小時(shí)乘飛機(jī)到達(dá)北京．句子考查it took/takes sb some time to do sth表示花費(fèi)某人多長(zhǎng)時(shí)間做某事，it作形式主語(yǔ)，真正的主語(yǔ)是to引導(dǎo)的不定式短語(yǔ)．

解答 My American friend
Suzy is my American friend．（引出話題）She has big bright eyes and long straight hair．She has a good sense of humour．（長(zhǎng)相）She often tells funny jokes and always makes people laugh（高分句型）．（個(gè)人品質(zhì)）
Among all the subjects，she likes French best，she thinks learning foreign languages is fun．In the school，she has lots of time for after-school activities．（學(xué)校生活）
Last week，it took her twelve hours to get to Beijing by plane．（高分句型）She visited some places of interest and learn a lot about the culture of China/Chinese culture．（旅游經(jīng)歷）
She also likes doing DIY．Yesterday，she decorated my bedroom with me．We painted the walls blue，put up some beautiful pictures and put in a bright light in my bedroom．We had fun working together．（介紹一次DIY工作）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，例如sense of humour，tells jokes，lots of after-school activities．，lplaces of interestast week，learn about，a lot，likes doing，put up had fun working等短語(yǔ)，文中還用到了賓語(yǔ)從句 she thinks learning foreign languages is fun．；固定句型it took her twelve hours to get to Beijing by plane．文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢．