Question

7．三年的初中生活，你對自己的表現(xiàn)一定有滿意的方面和不滿意的方面．假如你是林微，請參照以下提示，給你的學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們用英語寫一篇畢業(yè)留言，希望對他們有所幫助．

	提示內(nèi)容	提示詞
對自己滿意的方面	勤學(xué)好問，養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣；…	work hard，a good habit of
對自己不滿意的方面	忙于學(xué)習(xí)，鍛煉身體較少；…	be busy，do less sports
對學(xué)弟學(xué)妹的建議或希望	樂于助人，積極參加志愿者活動；…	be glad to，volunteer activities

注意：1參照提示適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名、人名；
3詞數(shù)80詞左右（開頭和結(jié)尾部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）．
Dear boys and girls，
I'm Linwei．It's my honor to share what I have got and lost in the past three years．                   
Thank you my teachers and schoolmates．Wish my school more beautiful，and my teachers and schoolmates happy life!
Yours，
Linwei．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：In the future I hope you should be glad to help others if someone is in trouble在將來，如果有人有麻煩，我希望你們樂于幫助別人．這是由hope引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，省略了引導(dǎo)詞that；后面是if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，要遵循主將從現(xiàn)的原則；be in trouble處于麻煩中．
高分句型二：I also hope you all can take an active part in some volunteer activities，such as being a volunteer in protecting the environment，in helping old people and so on．我也希望你們都能積極參加一些志愿者活動，比如做環(huán)保志愿者，幫助老人等等．這是由hope引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，省略了引導(dǎo)詞that；take an active part in在…起積極作用；such as例如．

解答 Dear boys and girls，
It's my honor to share what I have got and lost in the past three years． I am hard-working and have made great progress．I have developed many good habits of learning．I did well in the exams．（對自己滿意的方面）However，I have problems，too．I spent more time online and I have become quite weak in my eyesight．What's more，it's also a pity that I did less sports because of hard work．（對自己不滿意的方面）
In the future I hope you should be glad to help others if someone is in trouble．（高分句型一）I also hope you all can take an active part in some volunteer activities，such as being a volunteer in protecting the environment，in helping old people and so on．（高分句型二）（對學(xué)弟學(xué)妹的建議或希望）
Thank you my teachers and schoolmates．Wish my school more beautiful，and my teachers and schoolmates happy life!
                                                              Yours，
                                                                Linwei

點評 （1）句型多樣化，不要I（We）…到底，使人覺得乏味．（2）適當(dāng)使用一些并列句或主從復(fù)合句．（3）進(jìn)一步描繪人或事物時，適當(dāng)使用定語從句．（4）適當(dāng)使用分詞或分詞短語，烘托謂語動詞．（5）偶爾使用一下倒裝句，增加新鮮感．