Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（20分）

近階段，很多同學(xué)為了方便，跑到校外的路邊攤吃飯。雖然學(xué)校反復(fù)勸告，但收效甚微。為了更好的解決這個問題，政教處老師在同學(xué)們當(dāng)中做了一次調(diào)查。請根據(jù)下列調(diào)查結(jié)果，以 Should we go out for dinner? 為題寫一篇100字左右的短文。 （15分）

在外面吃飯的同學(xué)	在外面吃飯不用浪費很長時間去排隊(stand in line)。 學(xué)校的食物價格更貴。 外面的食物比學(xué)校的食物好吃。 學(xué)校食堂去晚了，沒有什么吃的了。
在學(xué)校吃飯的同學(xué)	學(xué)校食物更干凈，衛(wèi)生。 學(xué)校食物品種豐富。 和同學(xué)們坐在一起吃飯更有意思。
你的觀點和對同學(xué)和學(xué)校的建議: ......（至少兩條）

Should we go out for dinner?

Nowadays, many students like to eat dinner outside although they are warned not by the teachers.. Should we students go out for dinner?

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Answer 1

【答案】

Nowadays, many students like to eat dinner outside although they are warned not by the teachers.. Should we students go out for dinner? We know that some of our students do not like eating lunch at school because the food isn’t delicious. Some students say that the food in school dinning hall is expensive. It takes them a long time to stand in line. If somebody goes late, there will be less food for them. So they often go out of school to buy something to eat. But I’m afraid it’s bad for their health to eat lunch outside because some of the food they buy isn’t healthy enough. Instead the food in the school dinning hall is healthy. And it’s interesting for students to eat food together.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們根據(jù)調(diào)查寫一篇短文，我們在書寫時要注意，把提示的內(nèi)容全部寫進(jìn)去，避免生搬硬套，要有自己的觀點。

【亮點說明】1. 本文緊扣題目要求，根據(jù)調(diào)查寫出了學(xué)生在校內(nèi)和校外吃飯的優(yōu)勢和劣勢。2.文章句式不單一，有條件狀語從句：If somebody goes late, there will be less food for them. 有it做形式主語的句子：It’s interesting for students to eat food together.