Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

請根據(jù)下表中的信息用英文介紹你的好友Lily。要求條理清楚，語句通順，可做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。詞數(shù)90字左右，文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

I would like to tell you something about my close friend Lily.

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Answer 1

【答案】

I would like to tell you something about my close friend Lily.

She has a round face and big smiling eyes. She is a little shorter than I. She often wears a pair of small round glasses, so she looks very smart. She is a polite and honest girl, she is my real friend.I trust her, because she never lies and always keeps the secret for me. When I am sad, she always cares about me, and listens to my questions carefully. She has a sense of humor, she is also good at telling funny jokes. I seldom feel unhappy when I stay with her. She is willing to share things with others. When she helps others, she is always patient .She wants to be a social worker when she grows up.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇表格作文。本文要求按照作文要求結(jié)合表格中的內(nèi)容完成這篇介紹好友的文章，我們要用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z言把所列舉的內(nèi)容準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)出來。寫作中要包含好友外貌，特征進(jìn)行陳述。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱主要是第三人稱，注意并列連詞的使用及主謂一致問題。寫作中注意上下文的過度，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文簡明、扼要地闡明了好友莉莉的基本信息，并包含了文中所要求的全部信息。文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯的文章。