Question

【題目】書面表達。

請以“My Ideal School” 為題，寫一篇關于你自己的理想校園生生活的文章，語句通順，適當發(fā)揮，字數(shù)80左右，要點如下：

1. 我理想中的學校生活很精彩而有趣。

2. 每天8:30開始，下午3:00放學，中午有一小時的時間吃飯。

3. 我們有音樂課、電腦課、美術課等。課后有許多時間活動，我們可以每周打兩次籃球，可以去閱覽室看書。

4. 我們每天有半個小時的作業(yè)，周末我們可以舉辦小聚會或學校旅行。

5. 我們每天都很開心。

Answer 1

【答案】

My ideal school

I like to get up late,so my ideal school starts at 9 a.m . It finishes at 3 a.m. So we will have lots of time for after-school activities. It takes us half an hour to do our homework every day.

We have music ,computer ,PE. and so on. We have much free time to active after school, we can play basketball twice a week .We have an hour for lunch . There is a big dining hall . We eat lunch and chat there.

We can also listen to pop music in the hall. We eat fruit and vegetables every day.

We have activities after school once a week. At the weekend, we needn’t do much homework. We go on a school trip to Shanghai or we can have a party.We enjoy ourselves every day.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。運用適當?shù)亩陶Z表達中心思想，增加作文的可讀性。完成提示詞時也要符合事實。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

寫作亮點：這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。