Question

【題目】在學(xué)習(xí)緊張，壓力大的情況下，如何安排好自己的空閑時(shí)間（free time）更加顯得重要，每個(gè)人有度過自己空閑時(shí)間的不同方式，請以“ My Free Time”為題，寫一種或幾種你喜歡的度過空閑時(shí)間的方式。要求：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名或校名。2. 詞數(shù)為80~100。

Answer 1

【答案】My Free Time

I have lots of things to do in my free time. Usually I take exercise after school. I like basketball and volleyball very much. Sports help me to keep healthy and studybetter. I often watch TV or do some reading in the evening. Sometimes I listen to the music for a while. I find it is a good way to relax myself. Of course , I help myparents with the housework at the weekends .I clean the house, wash clothes and learn cooking. Sometimes I go on a field trip with my friends. We always have a good time.

【解析】試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。本文題材緊扣學(xué)生生活，學(xué)生有自我發(fā)揮的空間。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真審題，深入挖掘話題內(nèi)涵，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。行文時(shí)要注意人稱、時(shí)態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問題，同時(shí)注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文內(nèi)容涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織上很好地使用了簡單句和復(fù)合句，文章思路清晰，自然流暢。同時(shí)，使用了一些常用的句式和短語，這為文章增色不少。