Question

4．Writing at least 60 words on the topic"Better habits，Better life"．
（請你以"培養(yǎng)良好習(xí)慣，打造美好生活"為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格）．
（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分．）
The following questions are for your reference（以下信息僅供參考）：
1．What bad habits do you have in your life？
2．How do they affect（影響） your life？
3．How will you change your bad habits？
Habits，whether good or bad，will influence one's life．We should especially pay attention to our bad habits，like rudeness，laziness，lying，and stealing．Personally，depending on smart phones too muchis one of my most serious bad habits．My attentionshave been drawn awayby playing games，chatting online，watching movies and listening to musicso thatI lost enough chance to communicate with my families．Now，I come to realize its harm and decide to get rid of the habit．From now on，I will turn off my phone when it's unnecessary and go outside to do more exercise．If I cultivate good self-control，I amcertain togain great effect．In short，good habitshelp us be betterand bad onesmake us worse，so try hard toform good habits and keep far frombad ones．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①Now，I come to realize its harm and decide to get rid of the habit．現(xiàn)在，我意識到了它的危害，并決定改掉這個習(xí)慣．come to realize 表示意識到；decide to do sth表示決定做某事．
②From now on，I will turn off my phone when it's unnecessary and go outside to do more exercise．從現(xiàn)在起，我會在沒有必要的時候關(guān)掉我的手機(jī)，到外面多做運動．句子中From now on表示從今以后；when在這里引導(dǎo)一個時間狀語從句；do more exercise多做運動．

解答 Habits，whether good or bad，will influence one's life．（引出話題）We should especially pay attention to our bad habits，like rudeness，laziness，lying，and stealing．（生活中的壞習(xí)慣）Personally，depending on smart phones too much is one of my most serious bad habits．My attentions have been drawn away by playing games，chatting online，watching movies and listening to music so that I lost enough chance to communicate with my families．（我生活中出現(xiàn)的壞習(xí)慣）Now，I come to realize its harm and decide to get rid of the habit．（高分句型）From now on，I will turn off my phone when it's unnecessary and go outside to do more exercise（高分句型）．If I cultivate good self-control，I am certain to gain great effect．（我如何改變我的壞習(xí)慣）In short，good habits help us be better and bad ones make us worse，so try hard to form good habits and keep far from bad ones．（結(jié)束語）

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