Question

9．現(xiàn)在很多人喜歡在家里養(yǎng)狗和金魚作為寵物，你知道怎么樣照顧它們嗎？請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容寫一篇英語文章介紹如何照顧它們．

養(yǎng)狗	Dos	◆每天給它刷毛，使它保持干凈； ◆傍晚帶它外出遛一遛；
	Don'ts	◆不要帶它到公共場所； ◆…
養(yǎng)金魚	Dos	◆把它放入干凈的水里； ◆給它喂特殊的魚食，一天喂一次；
	Don'ts	◆不要把它放在太陽下； ◆不要喂太多； ◆…

參考詞匯：公共場所 public places
要求：1．內(nèi)容必須包括表格中內(nèi)容，并進行適當拓展．
2．條理清楚，語句通順．
3．詞數(shù)80詞左右，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．


Do you have a dog or a goldfish at home？If you have a dog at home，please brush its fur every day and keep it clean．Take it out for a walk in the evening．Don't take it to public places．Don't let it make a noise．
If you have a goldfish，put it in clean water．Give it special fish food and feed it once a day．Don't put it in the sun．Don't feed it too much．Don't pick it up with your hand．
Be a good master and they will be your good friends．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
If you have a dog at home，please brush its fur every day and keep it clean．如果家里有狗，請每天刷毛并保持干凈． 這是if引導的條件狀語從句，主句是一般將來時，從句用的是一般現(xiàn)在時．
高分句型二  
Don't put it in the sun．不要把它放在陽光下．in the sun在陽光下．

解答 Do you have a dog or a goldfish at home？
If you have a dog at home，please brush its fur every day and keep it clean【高分句型一，注意if引導的條件狀語從句的使用】．Take it out for a walk in the evening．Don't take it to public places．Don't let it make a noise．【要點一，如何養(yǎng)狗】
If you have a goldfish，put it in clean water．Give it special fish food and feed it once a day．Don't put it in the sun【高分句型二，注意固定詞組的使用】．Don't feed it too much．Don't pick it up with your hand．【要點二，如何養(yǎng)魚】
Be a good master and they will be your good friends．

點評 動筆前應先認真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語，句式等問題．注意不要遺漏要點，句子要通順連貫，沒有語法錯誤．