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【題目】目前，“低頭族”（phubber）的隊(duì)伍越來(lái)越龐大。我們可以在地鐵上、在公園里隨處可見(jiàn)手捧電子設(shè)備的人們，或?qū)Ｗ⒂谖⑿�，或�(qū)Ｗ⒂谟螒颉Ｆ鋵?shí)“低頭”帶來(lái)很多危害，請(qǐng)用英文介紹這一行為的弊端，并發(fā)起“不再低頭”(No phubbing)的倡議。

bad aspects	bad aspects
is bad for eyes	read books
have bad influence on their work or study	do sports
communicate less with families	…
…	…

注意：①必須包含表格中所含信息，并提出自己的兩點(diǎn)建議。
② 文中不出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名、姓名。
③不少于80詞。開(kāi)頭已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
These days，more and more people spend too much time on the electric screens. ……

Answer 1

【答案】These days, more and more people spend too much time on the electric screens. It's really bad for their health. Now it's time to stop phubbing.
First, it is bad for their eyes. It also has bad influence on their work or study because of playing with the electric products. What's worse, they communicate less with their families and finally cause more relative problems.
Some people think it is necessary for people to do more sports and travel in their free time. It's also a good way to read books to open up their eyes. They should take part in more outdoor activities to help them relax.
In my opinion, hanging out with friends is a good way to stay away from electric screens. They can also take up some hobbies in their spare time, such as playing the piano or learning to draw. Anyway, it's important for us to lead a healthy life!
【解析】本題是一片提綱性的寫(xiě)作。寫(xiě)作的話題為“低頭族”（phubber），在寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意符合語(yǔ)境，根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)。語(yǔ)言表達(dá)上要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)方式，英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)重頭，漢語(yǔ)表達(dá)重尾，切忌漢式英語(yǔ)。
寫(xiě)作步驟：

• 一.閱讀提示，弄清所有信息，明確寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)。
• 1.如今越來(lái)越多的人花費(fèi)太多時(shí)間在電子屏幕上。 more and more people spend too much time on the electric screens.
• 2.這是一種壞習(xí)慣，現(xiàn)在是時(shí)候停止低頭了。. It's really bad for their health. Now it's time to stop phubbing.
• 3.首先，它有害于眼睛。 it is bad for their eyes.
• 4.更多的，與家人交談的更少，最終造成了更多的家庭問(wèn)題。communicate less with their families and finally cause more relative problems.
• 5.他們應(yīng)該參加更多的戶外活動(dòng)去放松自己。They should take part in more outdoor activities to help them relax.
• 6.在我的觀點(diǎn)中，和朋友出去，培養(yǎng)一些興趣愛(ài)好都是遠(yuǎn)離電子屏幕的好方法。 hanging out with friends is a good way. take up some hobbies.
• 7.不管怎樣，一個(gè)健康的生活是很重要的。 Anyway, it's important for us to lead a healthy life!
• 二.根據(jù)要點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)出關(guān)鍵詞，短語(yǔ)和句子。
• 三.組詞成句，連句成篇。注意使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。