Question

15．在陽光雨露里，我已長高、長壯!但這還不是全部，長大還應(yīng)包括什么？是關(guān)心、幫助同學(xué)？是體貼、理解父母？是感恩、回報親朋師長？還是…成長的點點滴滴，久久不能忘記．請以"I Am Not a Child Any More"為題，用英語寫一篇詞數(shù)不少于80詞的短文．
要求：1語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔；
2文中不得使用你的真實姓名、校名；
3短文開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
I Am Not a Child Any More
I used to be weak and short．But now，
                                                  
I realized I was not a child any more．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：The most important thing is that I have learned to understand and care about others最重要的是我學(xué)會了理解和關(guān)心別人．這是一個主系表結(jié)構(gòu)的從句；care about關(guān)心．
高分句型二：I didn't know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital直到我父母從醫(yī)院回來，我才知道我母親病了．not…until…直到…才；come back返回．

解答 I Am Not a Child Any More 
         I am a 16-year-old girl now．I have changed a lot，I used to be weak and short．But now，I am stronger and as tall as my mother．The most important thing is that I have learned to understand and care about others．（高分句型一）（理解和關(guān)心他人）It was a Wednesday evening．When I went back home，no one was in．So I cooked the meal．I didn't know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital．（高分句型二）They both said the meal was very delicious，although it tasted salty．After supper，I found they were too tired，I got hot water for them．When my mother put her feet into the water，with tears in her eyes she said："Dear，you have grown up．"It was the first time that I cared about my parents．I realized I was not a child any more．（舉例說明）

點評 （1）句型多樣化，不要I（We）…到底，使人覺得乏味．（2）適當(dāng)使用一些并列句或主從復(fù)合句．（3）進一步描繪人或事物時，適當(dāng)使用定語從句．（4）適當(dāng)使用分詞或分詞短語，烘托謂語動詞．（5）偶爾使用一下倒裝句，增加新鮮感．