Question

14．Suggested questions：
1When and where did the experience happen？
2Why do you think it is unforgettable？（At least two reasons）
3What can you learn from the unforgettable experience？

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I had a very unforgettable experience when I was 11 years old當(dāng)我十一歲的時(shí)候我有一次難忘的經(jīng)歷．
when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
Our parents couldn't help us，because they didn't stay with us．我們的父母不能幫助我們，因?yàn)樗麄儧]有和我們在一起．
because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句．

解答 An unforgettable experience
Everyone has some unforgettable experiences．I had a very unforgettable experience when I was 11 years old．【高分句型一】（時(shí)間）I had some training with my classmates．We went to Fengxian and we needed to live in a small dormitory for two days．（地點(diǎn)）We did everything ourselves．Our parents couldn't help us，because they didn't stay with us．【高分句型二】We got up very early in the morning．We had to clean ourselves quickly．And then we stood in a line．We learnt a lot of things there，such as cooking，washing and even making beds．Every day，we had to practice more than five hours．（經(jīng)過）Now I think it was very hard for everyone but it was very good for us．Because we are looked after by our parents，but in fact should learn how to look after ourselves．（感受）What an unforgettable experience it is!

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