Question

12．你的朋友Jack由于晚上經(jīng)常玩電腦游戲、看電視而感到很累，現(xiàn)在經(jīng)常頭痛、腰背酸痛、眼睛不舒服，并且睡不好覺．由于愛吃垃圾食品有點發(fā)胖，而且經(jīng)常感冒，導致學習成績下降．請以Jack's Problems為題寫一篇短文介紹一下他的情況，并給出你對他的建議．
要求：1詞數(shù)：80-100詞；
2 包含上述提示要點，可適當發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；
3 文中不要出現(xiàn)真實校名和人名．
Jack's Problems
                                                             

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
His grade is becoming worse and worse他的成績越來越差．
比較級+and+比較級：越來越…
【高分句型二】
He shouldn't spend too much time playing computer games or watching TV because it's bad for his eyes他不應該長時間玩電腦游戲看電視，因為對眼睛有害．
because引導的原因狀語從句．

解答 Jack's Problems
    Jack is my friend．He likes playing computer games and watching TV at night．Now he always feels tired．He has a headache，a sore back and sore eyes．He can't sleep well．He likes to eat junk food and he is a little heavy now．He often has a cold．His grade is becoming worse and worse【高分句型一】．（他的情況）
    I think he should go to bed early．He shouldn't spend too much time playing computer games or watching TV because it's bad for his eyes【高分句型二】．He should take more exercise and stop eating junk food．（對他的建議）
    I think if he does so，he can become healthy and he will get good grades．

點評 寫作時先要圍繞這些要點組織材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容，注意將這些要點全部表達出來，并且要有適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮，在談到自己的觀點時，要結(jié)合活動內(nèi)容，寫出自己的觀點．