Question

1．書包伴我學(xué)習(xí)，伴我成長(zhǎng)，某英文報(bào)以"My schoolbag"為題，舉辦中學(xué)生征文活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列的圖表信息，寫一篇短文．內(nèi)容包括：書包的外形特征、用途和書包背后的課業(yè)問題以及課余你期望做的事情．
提示：1、短文應(yīng)包括圖表中的全部信息，條理清楚，行文連貫，段落分明；
2、短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名；
3、詞數(shù)不少于80，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總次數(shù)．

My Schoolbag
I have a schoolbag．          ．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是以"My schoolbag"為題介紹自己的書包以及書包背后的課業(yè)問題以及課余你期望做的事情．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一．三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．書包的外形特征
2．用途
3．書包背后的課業(yè)問題
4．課余你期望做的事情
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
be used for 用來…
bring sb sth 給某人帶來某物
instead of 代替
take part in 參加
rather than 而不是
【高分句型】
1．It looks like a luggage which always accompanies me in the world of knowledge．
which作為關(guān)系詞的定語(yǔ)從句，修飾先行詞luggage，which作為從句的主語(yǔ)．
2．We have to do so much homework that we cannot get enough sleep．
so…that如此…以致于，that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句．
3．If we have more spare time，we can take part in sports and actives．
if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，主句含有情態(tài)動(dòng)詞can，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．

解答 My Schoolbag
I have a schoolbag．It is red and big．（書包的外形特征）It is used for carrying the school things，such as books，pens and so on．It looks like a luggage which always accompanies me in the world of knowledge．【高分句型】（用途）
My schoolbag is always by my side．However，it also brings us many problems．We have to do so much homework that we cannot get enough sleep．【高分句型】Instead of enjoying the wonderful weekends，we are forced to have extra classes with it．（書包背后的課業(yè)問題）If we have more spare time，we can take part in sports and actives．【高分句型】Besides，we can develop hobbies and interest as well．（課余你期望做的事情）
As a middle school student，I hope my schoolbag can share my joy and happiness rather than become a burden．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是一篇圖表作文，圖表作為書面表達(dá)的一種信息提示方式，比提綱作文線索顯得更簡(jiǎn)潔明了，寫作時(shí)也容易區(qū)分表達(dá)，本題在寫作時(shí)，要特別注意幾種情況的描述，不能逐句翻譯，同時(shí)要根據(jù)提示有效靈活的構(gòu)思，恰當(dāng)使用邏輯詞語(yǔ)，讓文章顯得有條理，不雜亂．