Question

10．2014年8月15日，一年一度的南國書香節(jié)暨羊城書展開幕．假設你是李華，請你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容要求向你的朋友Becky介紹你參加書展的情況，寫一篇英語短文．
內(nèi)容要求：
1．會場很大，書的種類很多．我最喜歡的書是…
2．看見了林志穎、鐘南山等名人．
3．買了許多學習用品，和卡通人物照了相，參加了本土文化活動等等．
4．你參觀后的感想．
寫作要求：
1．詞數(shù)70左右；
2．不得透漏學校、姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予評分．
詞匯提示：會場 hall       本土文化 local culture activities

Dear Becky，
Do you know Nanguo Shuxiang Festival and book fair？It was held on August 15^th．I took part in it and let me tell you something about it．When I got there，I found the hall very large and there were many different kinds of books there．And I like the story books best．The most exciting thing is that I saw many famous people there，including Lin Zhiying，and Zhong Nanshan．I bought a lot of school things．I also took photos with cartoon characters and joined in some local culture activities．In my opinion，we should hold Nanguo Shuxiang Festival and book fair every year．It is well worth doing．Reading is very important．Reading makes a full man!
Yours，
Li hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
When I got there，I found the hall very large and there were many different kinds of books there．當我到達那里時，我發(fā)現(xiàn)大廳很大，有許多不同種類的書籍．
when引導的時間狀語從句．
different kinds of 不同種類的
句型二：
The most exciting thing is that I saw many famous people there，including Lin Zhiying，and Zhong Nanshan．最令人興奮的是，我看到很多名人，包括林志穎，和鐘南山．
 that 引導的表語從句．
The most exciting thing最令人興奮的事情，形容詞最高級．

解答 Dear Becky，
Do you know Nanguo Shuxiang Festival and book fair？It was held on August 15^th．I took part in it and let me tell you something about it．When I got there，I found the hall very large and there were many different kinds of books there．【高分句型一】And I like the story books best．The most exciting thing is that I saw many famous people there，including Lin Zhiying，and Zhong Nanshan．【高分句型二】I bought a lot of school things．I also took photos with cartoon characters and joined in some local culture activities．In my opinion，we should hold Nanguo Shuxiang Festival and book fair every year．It is well worth doing．Reading is very important．Reading makes a full man!
Yours，Li hua

點評 能夠根據(jù)提示進行書面表達，能夠圍繞主題準確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等，清楚連貫地表達自己的思想，進而完成寫作任務．