Question

10．失敗是成功之母．在過去的初三生活中，你是否犯過錯(cuò)誤并從中得到了寶貴的經(jīng)驗(yàn)與教訓(xùn)，從而取得進(jìn)步？現(xiàn)在請你談?wù)勀阕约涸阱e(cuò)誤中學(xué)到的東西．
內(nèi)容要求如下：
1．不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名．
2．至少從兩個(gè)方面談?wù)勀愕倪M(jìn)步．
3．文章層次清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語句連貫．
4．詞數(shù)：80～100詞．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)勀阕约涸阱e(cuò)誤中學(xué)到的東西．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過去時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1與人交往
2學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)步
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
make mistakes犯錯(cuò)誤
get on with sb與某人相處
on the one hand…，on the other hand…一方面…另一方面…
keep away from 遠(yuǎn)離
with the help of sb在某人的幫助下
make progress取得進(jìn)步
【高分句型】
1．①At first，②it was difficult for me to get along with my classmates，③so I④kept myself away from others．
①at first 起初
②It is+adj+for sb+to do sth對某人來說做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動(dòng)詞不定式做真正主語．
③so表示所以，引出后一分句，表結(jié)果．
④keep away from 遠(yuǎn)離．
2．①However，②with the help of my teachers and classmates，I have③made great progress and now I ④do well in all the subjects．
①however然而，表轉(zhuǎn)折．
②with the help of sb在某人的幫助下
③make progress取得進(jìn)步
④do well in 擅長…

解答 During the past three years，I have made many mistakes．Also，I have got great experience from them．
On the one hand，I have become better at getting on with people．At first，it was difficult for me to get along with my classmates，so I kept myself away from others．【高分句型】Later I found out the reasons and actively made new friends．Now，I have lots of friends．（與人交往）On the other hand，I have become much more confident．In the beginning，I hated going to school and doing all the homework．I acted as a bad student．However，with the help of my teachers and classmates，I have made great progress and now I do well in all the subjects．【高分句型】（學(xué)業(yè)進(jìn)步）

點(diǎn)評 提綱作文注意：
1．仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)．
2．提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，
   按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．
3．根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣．