Question

16．我健康，我快樂(lè)．請(qǐng)你以為題寫(xiě)一篇70詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文．要求包含以下信息：
1．運(yùn)動(dòng)的重要性．2．你喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)是什么？3．為迎接學(xué)校即將到來(lái)的運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)，你打算怎么做？
Let's do sports
I think it is important for everyone to do sports．I like sports because                               

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I like sports because①②doing sports  can not only help us keep fit，but also help to train a person′s character我喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)因?yàn)檫\(yùn)動(dòng)能幫助我們保持健康，也能培養(yǎng)一個(gè)人的性格．
①because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句．
②動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)做主語(yǔ)．
③not only…but also…不僅…而且…連接兩個(gè)對(duì)等的成分．
【高分句型二】
I hope I can win some prizes in the game我希望我能在比賽中贏得一些獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng)．
hope后是省略了that的賓語(yǔ)從句．

解答 Let's do sports
I think it is important for everyone to do sports．I like sports because doing sports  can not only help us keep fit，but also help to train a person′s character．【高分句型一】Doing sports can make us stronger and stronger．What′s more，doing sports helps us to study better．After sports，I often feel relaxed and happy，although a bit tired．（運(yùn)動(dòng)的重要性）
My favorite sport is swimming．I often go swimming with my friends at the weekends．（喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)）The school sports meeting is coming．I'll  train harder for it．I hope I can win some prizes in the game．【高分句型二】（打算怎么做）Let′s do  sports and have a healthy lifestyle together!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 首先要仔細(xì)審題，嚴(yán)格按照要求去寫(xiě)作．其次要注意時(shí)態(tài)人稱(chēng)的選擇；再次行文中要語(yǔ)句通順，注意上下句的銜接，用英語(yǔ)式的思維去組織每個(gè)句子，避免受漢語(yǔ)的影響．采用不同的句式，盡量避免重復(fù)．注意不要出現(xiàn)單詞，語(yǔ)法和時(shí)態(tài)等的錯(cuò)誤．這樣的文章就是好文章