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3．在英語(yǔ)課上，同學(xué)們就自己喜歡的旅游方式展開了討論．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，匯報(bào)討論結(jié)果，并談?wù)勛约旱南敕ǎ?br />

團(tuán)隊(duì)旅游	◆有導(dǎo)游，不會(huì)迷路； ◆不必自己找賓館； ◆結(jié)識(shí)朋友，相互幫助．
個(gè)人旅游	◆自由安排時(shí)間； ◆選擇自己喜歡的旅游景點(diǎn)； ◆學(xué)會(huì)照顧自己，
你的想法	…

注意：1．文章必須包括表中全部?jī)?nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；
2．想法至少在兩句以上；
3．開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，你只需接著寫；
4．詞數(shù)：80一100．
參考詞匯：團(tuán)隊(duì)旅游travel with a group；個(gè)人旅游travel alone安排arrange
Recently，we have discussed the ways to go traveling．Here is the result．Some students choose to travel with a group．With a guide's help，they won't get lost and they don't need to look for hotels by themselves．Besides，they can make friends and help each other while traveling．
However，other students prefer to travel alone．That's because they can arrange their time freely and choose to visit their favorite sights．What's more，it's a chance for them to learn to look after themselves．
For me，I'd like to travel alone．I want to spend enough time visiting the places I like．In this way，I can enjoy my vacation better．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是針對(duì)自己喜歡的旅游方式的討論結(jié)果匯報(bào)結(jié)果且談?wù)勛约旱目捶ǎ畷r(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第三人稱和第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1團(tuán)隊(duì)旅游：有導(dǎo)游，不會(huì)迷路；不必自己找賓館；結(jié)識(shí)朋友，相互幫助．
2個(gè)人旅游：自由安排時(shí)間；選擇自己喜歡的旅游景點(diǎn)；學(xué)會(huì)照顧自己
3自己的看法．

常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
with one's help在某人的幫助下
look for尋找
besides另外
make friends 交朋友
what's more再者
learn to do sth學(xué)習(xí)做某事
look after照顧
would like to do sth想要去做某事

高分句型：
1．①Besides，they can make friends and help each other②while traveling．
①besides另外，闡述下一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)．
②whil traveling是一個(gè)省略句，完整表達(dá)是while they are traveling，是一個(gè)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，主語(yǔ)和主句主語(yǔ)一致，故省略．
2．I want to ②spend enough time visiting the places②I like．
①spend 時(shí)間+doing sth花時(shí)間做某事
②I like是定語(yǔ)從句，修飾先行詞places，關(guān)系詞which或者that作為定語(yǔ)從句的賓語(yǔ)，故省略．

解答 Recently，we have discussed the ways to go traveling．Here is the result．Some students choose to travel with a group．With a guide's help，they won't get lost and they don't need to look for hotels by themselves．Besides，they can make friends and help each other while traveling．（高分句型）（團(tuán)隊(duì)旅游）
     However，other students prefer to travel alone．That's because they can arrange their time freely and choose to visit their favorite sights．What's more，it's a chance for them to learn to look after themselves．（個(gè)人旅游）
     For me，I'd like to travel alone．I want to spend enough time visiting the places I like．（高分句型）In this way，I can enjoy my vacation better．（自己的看法）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇圖表給出材料的作文，圖表中給出的材料較為豐富，考生在寫作時(shí)，圖表內(nèi)容必須包括在內(nèi)．在自己的觀點(diǎn)部分，考生需要自己適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，建議考生在平時(shí)的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)中積累一些常用到的重點(diǎn)句型和短語(yǔ)，出彩的發(fā)揮會(huì)給文章增色不少．