Question

緊張的初三學(xué)習(xí)就快結(jié)束了，同學(xué)們?cè)谝黄鹩懻撨@個(gè)暑假干什么，下面是同學(xué)們討論的

結(jié)果。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的表格把學(xué)生們的討論結(jié)果寫(xiě)成一篇短文。

Name	Activities	Reasons
Tina	Go to Beijing	1.To see the Great Wall  and  other beautiful sights in Beijing  2. have fun
Jim	Stay at home	1.Too tired and have a good rest  2. ..
You	….	…..

注意：1. 內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的信息；

2. 開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)為你寫(xiě)好，你只需接著寫(xiě)； 

3. 詞數(shù)：70個(gè)左右。開(kāi)頭的部分內(nèi)容不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Recently our class had a discussion about what they would do in the coming summer vacation.  Here is the result.????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

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Answer 1

【答案】

Recently our class had a discussion about what they would do in the coming summer vacation. Here is the result: Tina is going to Beijing with her friends. She thinks it’s the capital of China. She wants to see the Great Wall and? it’s very wonderful. She also wants to visit many beautiful sights, like the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum. She thinks they will have fun in Beijing. Jim plans to stay at home. After a period of nervous study, it is really tired for him. He plans to have a good rest and help his parents with the housework..? He thinks it makes them happy.

In my opinions, I plan to make my holiday happy and meaningful. First of all, I am going to read a lot of books and make a good balance between study and rest. Secondly, it is necessary to visit my grandparents during my holiday. Besides, I am willing to do some volunteer work in the Old People’s house. I can’t wait now.?

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心內(nèi)容。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：1、考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，尤其要注意的是要介紹你本人的活動(dòng)及原因。2、有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。3、注意字?jǐn)?shù)不能少，當(dāng)然也不能過(guò)多。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】1、短文層次分明，條理清楚，運(yùn)用一系列副詞first of all, secondly, besides使人一目了然。2、內(nèi)容健康，積極向上，有一定的導(dǎo)向性，如：平衡學(xué)習(xí)和休息、拜訪長(zhǎng)輩尤其是做志愿者工作。3、短文運(yùn)用了大量的積極詞匯，比如：In my opinions，first of all，besides等。4、短文內(nèi)容充實(shí)，包含了所有的要點(diǎn)。

考點(diǎn)：圖表作文。