Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)（共15分）

寫(xiě)作：假如你是Simon，你想推薦你班同學(xué)Sandy為本學(xué)期最佳學(xué)生獎(jiǎng)(the Best Student Award)得主，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一封推薦信(不少于70個(gè)詞)：

1. 聰明，學(xué)東西快，各門功課學(xué)得很好。對(duì)中國(guó)歷史了解很多。

2. 考慮問(wèn)題細(xì)致，計(jì)劃周全，是“助人為樂(lè)俱樂(lè)部”的一員，參與各種活動(dòng)，如：經(jīng)常在車上給老人讓座，為貧窮地區(qū)的孩子們捐款。

3. 擅長(zhǎng)運(yùn)動(dòng)擅長(zhǎng)打籃球，是�；@球隊(duì)的成員, 有時(shí)教新成員打籃球。

4. 對(duì)人友好，樂(lè)于助人，我們都喜歡他。

Dear Sir/Madam

I’d like to

Yours faithfully

Simon

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir,

I’d like to recommend Sandy to be the Best Student Award. The reasons are the follows.

Sandy is very clever and she learns things quickly. She studies all her subjects well. Besides, she knows a lot about Chinese history. She thinks a lot and plans well before she does things. She is a member of Help Others Club and she joins many activities. For example, she often makes room for the old on the bus. She also donates money for children in poor areas.

She is good at playing basketball and she is on our school basketball team. Sometimes she teaches new members to play basketball. She is friendly to others and is always ready to help others. We all like her.

Yours faithfully,

Simon

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們以Simon的身份給學(xué)校寫(xiě)一封推薦信，推薦Sandy為本學(xué)期最佳學(xué)生獎(jiǎng)。我們要在信中說(shuō)明推薦Sandy的原因，題目中給出了我們具體的寫(xiě)作提綱，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，注意語(yǔ)句通順，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)規(guī)范，內(nèi)容全面，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。通過(guò)分析可知，這篇短文我們應(yīng)該使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第三人稱單數(shù)she來(lái)表達(dá)，因此我們要特別注意句中謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的形式，都要用第三人稱單數(shù)形式。另外，我們還需要注意表達(dá)的連貫和流暢，多使用我們學(xué)過(guò)的句型和短語(yǔ)，還有一些連詞，可以使短文意思更連貫。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文，短文中作者按照題目要求完成了一封推薦信。短文的意思非常完整，語(yǔ)句也很通順，表達(dá)也比較流暢。首先作者先點(diǎn)明了寫(xiě)信的目的，I’d like to recommend Sandy to be the Best Student Award，一句話帶過(guò)，意思非常簡(jiǎn)潔，但是也達(dá)到了目的。短文的中心集中在表述推薦Sandy的原因上，作者分成了兩段來(lái)表達(dá)。這一部分是短文的重點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，作者按照題目列出的提綱進(jìn)行了翻譯，但是同時(shí)也注意使用了一些連詞，將一些語(yǔ)句連接，使文章語(yǔ)意連貫。這一部分中使用的比較好的句型有：Besides, she knows a lot about Chinese history.、She is a member of Help Others Club and she joins many activities、She is good at playing basketball and she is on our school basketball team、She is friendly to others and is always ready to help others等。