Question

【題目】回首三年的母校生活，學(xué)校里的很多規(guī)則有助于你的健康成長。請你根據(jù)要求寫出我們的校規(guī)，并說出你對這些校規(guī)有何看法？以My School Rules 為題，寫一篇短文。

提示 1. 上學(xué)不許遲到。 2. 每天必須穿校服 3. 不許在教室里跑

4. 上課不許吃東西 5. 上課認(rèn)真聽講 6. 不許抽煙

要求：1. 語言表達準(zhǔn)確，語意通順、連貫；

2. 書寫工整、規(guī)范；

3. 根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容，請做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

4. 詞數(shù)：70詞左右。文章的題目和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

My school rules

In our school, I have many rules.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】 My School Rules

In our school, we have many rules. We shouldn't be late for school. We have to wear school uniforms to school every day. We can't run or shout in the hallways. We can't eat in class. We should listen to the teachers carefully in class. We aren't allowed to smoke in school.

I think our school rules are too strict. We should be allowed to choose our own clothes. That will make us more comfortable. We shouldn't have too much homework to do every day.

【解析】

這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下你們的校規(guī)。所提供的材料中列舉了上學(xué)不許遲到；每天必須穿校服；不許在教室里跑；上課不許吃東西；上課認(rèn)真聽講； 不許抽煙，主要從這六個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達具有條理性。

【高分句型一】

I think our school rules are too strict. 我覺得我們的校規(guī)太嚴(yán)格了。句子our school rules are too strict.做think的賓語。

【高分句型二】

That will make us more comfortable. 那會讓我們更舒服。more comfortable是比較級，做make的賓補。