Question

【題目】書面表達

英語課上，同學(xué)們正在準(zhǔn)備舉行以“我最好的朋友”為話題的演講活動。請你以Tom的名義寫一篇演講稿，向同學(xué)們介紹一下你最好的朋友。

要求：1、參考提示語，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2、語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；

3、文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實信息；

4、詞數(shù):不少于70詞；（開頭結(jié)尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)）。

要求：1.What does your friend look like?

2.How is he/she different from you?

3.Why do you like him/her?

Hello,everyone!

I am Tom and I am very happy to stand here to talk about my best friend____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thanks for listening!

Answer 1

【答案】Hello,everyone!

I am Tom and I am very happy to stand here to talk about my best friend Lily. Lily is a Chinese girl. She is tall and has long straight hair. She is outgoing and always tells funny stories. She is different from me. I am a little serious. She likes music and dancing best, but I didn’t like them at first. She often sings and dances when we are together. Now I like music. She also tells stories to us and makes us laugh. When I am together with her, I will feel very happy. She is good at Chinese. I usually communicate with her in Chinese. I have improved my pronunciation.I am no longer afraid to speak Chinese, too. So friends needn't to be the same. Friends are like books—you don't need a lot of them as long as they are good.

Thanks for listening!

【解析】

這是一篇話題作文。以“我最好的朋友” 為話題寫一篇演講稿。由于在要點中只給出了寫作的大致方向，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動筆前要圍繞主題組織材料，審清主題，確定時態(tài)主要詞匯等問題。列出本文的寫作提綱。寫作中可適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意表達順序，表達要有條理性，語句通順，意思連貫，要符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無拼寫、語法錯誤（時態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：

大家好！

我叫湯姆，我很高興站在這里和談?wù)勎易詈玫呐笥牙蚶�。莉莉是個中國女孩。她個子高，頭發(fā)又長又直。她很外向，總是講有趣的故事。她和我不一樣。我有點嚴(yán)肅。她最喜歡音樂和舞蹈，但起初我不喜歡他們。我們在一起時，她經(jīng)常唱歌跳舞�，F(xiàn)在我有點喜歡音樂。她也給我們講故事，讓我們大笑。當(dāng)我和她在一起時，我會感到非常高興。她擅長漢語。我通常用中文和她交流。我的發(fā)音已經(jīng)提高，我也不再害怕說漢語了。所以朋友不必一樣。朋友就像書，只要他們好，你就不需要很多。

謝謝你的聆聽！