Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（滿分15分）

今年春節(jié)晚會上，很多人加入了搶紅包游戲活動，但也有人表示擔(dān)憂。假如你叫李華，你班最近開展了一個有關(guān)搶紅包游戲活動的調(diào)查。請你用英文給學(xué)校�？�《英語園地》寫一封信，介紹此次調(diào)查的結(jié)果并談?wù)勀愕挠^點。

70%學(xué)生參加搶紅包游戲活動
75%學(xué)生表示贊成	1. 帶來更多樂趣 2. 結(jié)識更多的朋友 3. …...
25%學(xué)生表示擔(dān)憂	1. 花費(fèi)太多的時間 2. 和家人交流少 3. … ...
你的觀點…...	…...

注意：

1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

2. 語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；

3. 詞數(shù)：80左右，信件的開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：搶紅包grabbing red packets

Dear Editor,

I am writing to tell you about the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” in our class.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

I am writing to tell you about the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” in our class. About 70% of the students took part in the game in my class. About 75% of them think it can bring them more fun and they can make more friends. However, about 25% of them are worried about the activity. They say some people spend too much time grapping red packets. Moreover, they don’t have enough communication with their family members. As a result, they may feel a little lonely.

I think this game is really exciting, but we should spend more time communicating with our family members.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點一定齊全。句子要完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意時態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，要點齊全。文中有一些好的表達(dá)方式如About 75% of them think it can bring them more fun and they can make more friends. However, about 25% of them are worried about the activity. They say some people spend too much time grapping red packets.等等。