分析 這是一篇提綱作文.內(nèi)容是以校學生會的名義就"創(chuàng)建文明城市"這一主題寫一封倡議書.時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時.人稱主要為第一人稱.
寫作思路:考生需要首先審清主題,圍繞主題展開作文.
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文,即本文的寫作要點:
1.愛護花草樹木;
2.不在公共場所隨地吐痰、亂扔垃圾;
3.遵守交通規(guī)則;
4.尊敬師長,禮貌待人;
5.團結友愛,助人為樂.
常用到的重點短語:
be supposed to 應該…
take care of照顧
in public在公共場所
break the rules不遵守規(guī)則
get on with sb與某人相處
besides另外
be ready to do sth 樂意做某事
高分句型:
1.①To ②make our city more beautiful,we ③are supposed to ④take care of flowers and trees.
①動詞不定式To make our city more beautiful作為目的狀語,也可以用In order to make our city more beautiful.非謂語動詞的運用.
②make sb/sth+adj使某人/某物.怎么樣,make our city more beautiful使我們的城市更美麗.
③be supposed to 應該…相當于should.
④take care of照顧 照看,相當于look after.
2.①Besides,We should ②be always ready to help each other.
①Besides另外,承接下文.
②be ready to do sth 樂意做某事.此外,它還有"準備好了去做某事"的意思.如:I am ready to go."我隨時都可以走了"(做好了走的準備)
解答 Dear schoolmates,
Our Neijiang City is trying to set up a national civilized city.We know it includes excellent environment and good behavior.So we middle school students can do something for it.
To make our city more beautiful,we are supposed to take care of flowers and trees.(高分句型)(愛護花草樹木)We mustn't spit in public or throw rubbish everywhere(不隨地吐痰、亂扔垃圾).And we should not break the traffic rules.(遵守交通規(guī)則)
As middle school students,we should respect our teachers and the old.(尊敬師長)We should also get on well with each other friendly and be polite to other people.(禮貌待人,團結友愛)Besides,We should be always ready to help each other.(高分句型)Do you agree with us?(助人為樂)
Let's start from ourselves!
The Student Union June 13th,2010
點評 此為材料作文,要仔細審題,抓住重點,將所給信息條理清楚的表達出來,可使用一些表示順序的詞,使論述更明確,更有層次感.還要注意多使用一些委婉的提建議的句型,盡量使用不同的句型以避免文章枯燥單調(diào).要求語句通順,語法,詞匯,時態(tài)正確,書寫規(guī)范.
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