Question

13．假如你是李華．你在向英國(guó)筆友Peter介紹參觀北京科技館的活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一封電子郵
件．簡(jiǎn)要敘述參觀的過(guò)程，以及你的感受．
．提示詞語(yǔ)：the Beijing Science and Technology Museum （in Chaoyang District），take，excited，in?
ventions，scientific exhibitions，experiment
提示問(wèn)題：●Where is the Bejing Science and Technology Museum？
●Who did you go with？What did you do there？
●How did you feel？
Dear Peter，
How is it going？
I'm writing to tell you my visit to the Bejing Science and Technology Museum．
                                                                 
Yours，Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
①Although we were very excited②when we saw the museum，we went into the museum in two lines．
雖然當(dāng)我們看見(jiàn)博物館的時(shí)候很興奮，但是我們還是排成兩隊(duì)進(jìn)去的．
①although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句．
②when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，當(dāng)…時(shí)．
【高分句型二】
After we got into it，we saw many new inventions and scientific exhibitions．
當(dāng)我進(jìn)去后，我們看見(jiàn)了很多新發(fā)明和科學(xué)展覽．
after引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，在…之后．

解答 Dear Peter，
How is it going？I'm writing to tell you my visit to the Beijing Science and Technology Museum．The Beijing Science and Technology Museum is in Chaoyang District．（位置）Last Sunday I visited it with my classmates．We started off at six from Pinggu．It took us an hour and a half to get there by bus．Although we were very excited when we saw the museum，we went into the museum in two lines．【高分句型一】After we got into it，we saw many new inventions and scientific exhibitions．【高分句型二】We listened to the teacher there carefully and got a lot from their clear explanation．Then we took some photos and did some experiments．Each of us had a good time．（一起去的人和所做的事情）
On my way back，we still talked about the visit．I felt quite happy and hoped to visit it again in the future．（我的感受）
Yours
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞，注意描述的全面性；語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．