Question

假如你是小明，在英國夏令營活動(dòng)中，你和來自不同國家的中學(xué)生交流了各自的職業(yè)夢(mèng)想。現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格的信息，在班會(huì)課上做一個(gè)匯報(bào)。

Name	What	Why
Bobbie (UK)	movie star	1. popular 2. love acting
Mark  ( U.S.A)	professional basketball player	make much money play basketball very well
Xiao Ming	...	... ...

注意：1. 內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的信息；
2. 開頭已經(jīng)為你寫好，請(qǐng)續(xù)寫并完成此匯報(bào)；
3. 詞數(shù)：70個(gè)左右。開頭部分不計(jì)入短文詞匯的總數(shù)。
Dear classmates,
I am reporting to tell you about our dreams. ______________________________                       
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Answer 1

Dear classmates,
I am reporting to tell you about our dreams.Bobbie who is from UK wants to be a movie star.In his opinin ,movie stars are popular with most people.and he loves acting.he thinks it’s interesting and exciting to act in the movie.
Mark comes from USA.To be a professional baskball player is his job dream all the time. He thinks he would make much money if he were a famous professional baskball player.Also,he plays basktball very much.
As for me ,Iwant to be asinger because I like music and I have a nice voice.now I have music classes three times a week.
Different people have different job dreams in the summer camp.But we are all willing to try our best to achieve our dreams.

試題分析：這是一篇利用圖表的給材料作文。要求介紹英國夏令營中，來自不同國家的中學(xué)生的職業(yè)夢(mèng)想。主要介紹，來自哪里，職業(yè)夢(mèng)想是什么，為什么有這種想法。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可能會(huì)用到一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和將來時(shí)。表格中給出了是三個(gè)人的名字。Bobbie ,Mark,第三人稱，因?yàn)槟闶切∶�，所以介紹自己時(shí)要用第一人稱I。由于介紹每個(gè)人的內(nèi)容類型近似，所以要注意句式的變化。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文不僅介紹人物時(shí)注意避免句式重復(fù)而且使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。.如is from, comes from ,are popular with, are all willing to try our best等。句式it’s interesting and exciting to act in the movie. Bobbie who is from UK wants to be a movie star.定語從句， As for me，等，使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。