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8．假如你是校報(bào)編輯，學(xué)校決定在校報(bào)上宣傳一批優(yōu)秀學(xué)生．請(qǐng)你用英文向全校同學(xué)介紹優(yōu)秀學(xué)生之一王磊，內(nèi)容如下：
1）王磊，男，九年級(jí)一班學(xué)生；
2）王磊的外貌、興趣愛好和特長；
3）王磊的英語成績優(yōu)異，介紹他學(xué)習(xí)英語的2-3種方法；
4）王磊樂于助人，在學(xué)習(xí)上幫助同方．
要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；
2）必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3）詞數(shù)：80詞左右；
4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名和校名等．
Wang Lei is a student of Class one Grade nine．He is a boy．He is tall and thin．He likes playing basketball with his classmates after school．He is good at drawing and dancing．He does well in learning English，so his grade is excellent．He has some good ways to learn English．He often reads English stories and listens to the native English，such as BBC，VOA．He is always ready to help others．He usually helps his classmates to study at school．So we all like him．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：He is…； He likes…； He has…以及So we all like…．
寫作要點(diǎn)：主要介紹王磊的班級(jí)，外貌，興趣愛好特長，學(xué)英語的方法．以及樂于助人的好品質(zhì)．
短語和句型：
like doing sth，喜歡做某事；
be good at，擅長做某事；
do well in，在某方面做得好；
be ready to do sth．準(zhǔn)備好做某事；
高分句型：
1．He is good at drawing and dancing．
他擅長畫畫和舞蹈．
be good at+doing…，擅長做某事，介詞at+doing．
2．He has some good ways to learn English．
他有一些學(xué)英語的好方法．
to learn English，不定式短語，作后置定語，修飾ways．
3．He usually helps his classmates to study at school．
在學(xué)校，他通常幫助他的同學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)．
help sb．（to） do sth．幫助某人做某事．

解答 參考范文：
Wang Lei is a student of Class one Grade nine．He is a boy．＜簡單介紹：王磊，男，九年級(jí)一班學(xué)生；＞He is tall and thin．He likes playing basketball with his classmates after school．【高分句型1】He is good at drawing and dancing．＜王磊的外貌、興趣愛好和特長；＞He does well in learning English，so his grade is excellent．【高分句型2】He has some good ways to learn English．He often reads English stories and listens to the native English，such as BBC，VOA．＜介紹他學(xué)習(xí)英語的2-3種方法．＞He is always ready to help others．【高分句型3】He usually helps his classmates to study at school．So we all like him．＜王磊的人品．＞

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題主要考查書面表達(dá)．為了提高書面表達(dá)水平，平時(shí)應(yīng)加強(qiáng)閱讀，應(yīng)背誦一些句型、段落、甚至短文．只要讀得多，背得多，就能出口成章，下筆成文．此外，還要了解英文寫作方面的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)，掌握常用文體的寫作方法．其實(shí)，用英文寫信，記日記等都是學(xué)生力所能及且行之有效的練習(xí)寫作的好方法．