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6．2015年的3.15晚會(huì)再一次曝光了食品安全問(wèn)題，麥當(dāng)勞用一些過(guò)期的原料，一些商販出售毒豆芽等，引來(lái)輿論嘩然，食品安全再次成為人們關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)．作為一名中學(xué)生消費(fèi)者，該如何維護(hù)自己的權(quán)益，吃到放心的食品？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提供的要點(diǎn)，給校報(bào)英語(yǔ)專欄寫一篇80詞左右的短文，并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ǎㄖ辽?點(diǎn)）．
1．買食品前檢查生產(chǎn)日期，查看是否過(guò)期；
2．識(shí)別食品是否新鮮或變質(zhì)；
3．購(gòu)物以后索取并保管好發(fā)票；
4．發(fā)現(xiàn)問(wèn)題食品以后，撥打12315或向當(dāng)?shù)叵�費(fèi)者協(xié)會(huì)尋求幫助．
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注意：1．詞數(shù)：90詞左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2．應(yīng)覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)：可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；
3．參考詞匯：date日期；   overdue  過(guò)期的；   go bad 變質(zhì)； invoice發(fā)票；  Consumer Association  消費(fèi)者協(xié)會(huì)．
Fight for food safety
Since the CCTV program exposed the wrongdoing by a McDonald's restaurants．Some persons sell poison bean sprouts．The safety of food has become a hot topic．What shall we do to fight for our rights and interests？
First，before buying food，we need to check the date and see whether it is overdue．Then we should study carefully what we buy and decide if it is fresh or it goes bad．After we pay for the food，we should get the invoice and take good care of it．Last but not the least，if we find there's a problem with the food，call 12315 or go to local Consumer Association for help．
Food safety is of great importance in our daily life．In my opinion，the government should take action to punish the producers and companies that went against consumers'rights．On the other hand，we should learn to be wise consumers．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容談?wù)剬?duì)食品安全健康的看法．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱和第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從兩個(gè)大的方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1買食品前檢查生產(chǎn)日期，查看是否過(guò)期；
2識(shí)別食品是否新鮮或變質(zhì)；
3購(gòu)物以后索取并保管好發(fā)票；
4發(fā)現(xiàn)問(wèn)題食品以后，撥打12315或向當(dāng)?shù)叵�費(fèi)者協(xié)會(huì)尋求幫助
5我的看法（至少兩點(diǎn)）
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
a hot topic一個(gè)熱點(diǎn)話題
overdue過(guò)期的；
go bad變質(zhì)
Last but not the least最后也是最重要的是
be of great importance非常重要
On the other hand另一方面
【高分句型】：
1．Then we should study carefully①what we buy and decide②if it is fresh or it goes bad．
①what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句．作為study的賓語(yǔ)．
②if引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，作為decide的賓語(yǔ)．
2①．Last but not the least，②if we find③there's a problem with the food，call 12315 or go to local Consumer Association for help
①Last but not the least最后也是最重要的是作為插入語(yǔ)，承接上下文，
②if表示如果，引導(dǎo)的是條件狀語(yǔ)從句，主句是祈使句，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)代替一般將來(lái)時(shí)．
③賓語(yǔ)從句there's a problem with the food．作為find的賓語(yǔ)．

解答 Since the CCTV program exposed the wrong doings by a McDonald's restaurant in Beijing，the safety of food has become a hot topic．What shall we do to fight for our rights and interests？
First，before buying food，we need to check the date and see whether it is overdue．（檢查是否過(guò)期）Then we should study carefully what we buy and decide if it is fresh or it goes bad．（識(shí)別是否新鮮）（高分句型）After we pay for the food，we should get the invoice and take good care of it．（保管好發(fā)票）Last but not the least，if we find there's a problem with the food，call 12315 or go to local Consumer Association for help．（尋求幫忙）（高分句型）
Food safety is of great importance in our daily life．In my opinion，the government should take action to punish the producers and companies that went against consumers'rights．On the other hand，we should learn to be wise consumers．（我的看法）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本文是一篇給材料作文，短文的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出．寫作時(shí)先要圍繞這些要點(diǎn)組織材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容，注意將這些要點(diǎn)全部表達(dá)出來(lái)，并且要有適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，在談到自己的觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，要結(jié)合活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，寫出自己的觀點(diǎn)．