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書(shū)面表達(dá)

你們學(xué)校最近就“一個(gè)好朋友的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)”做了一次問(wèn)卷調(diào)查，調(diào)查結(jié)果如下圖。

請(qǐng)你以“What a good friend should be like”為題，用英語(yǔ)為你們學(xué)校的校報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇短文，報(bào)道此次調(diào)查結(jié)果并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?/P>

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注意：1．詞數(shù)：80－100(開(kāi)頭已給出的內(nèi)容不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；

2．內(nèi)容必須包括上圖中的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3．文章條理清楚、意思連貫、語(yǔ)句通順；

4．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名。

What a good friend should be like

Recently, we did a survey in our school on what a good friend should be like．

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　　參考范文一：

What a good friend should be like

　　Recently, we did a survey in our school on what a good friend should be like．About seven percent/only a few/Less than ten percent of the students prefer their friends should be beautiful or handsome．About forty－eight percent/Less than half/Nearly half of the students think that their friends should be hardworking and good at their lessons．Sixty－seven percent of the students hope their friends should be fond of singing and dancing, and also they should be good at sports．Ninety-five percent/Almost all of the students agree that their friends should be not only lively, kind and helpful but also honest．Good friends should trust each other and share joys．I think to be honest is the most important for us all．

　　參考范文二：

　　Recently, we did a survey in our school on what a good friend should be like．Nearly all(95％)of the students think a good friend should be kind, helpful and honest．He or she should trust you and be willing to share joys with you．Sixty-seven percent of the students would like their friends to be fond of singing and dancing．Besides, they hope their friends are good at sports．Forty-eight percent of the students agree that a good friend must be hard－working and do well in lessons．Of course, there are some(7％/less than 10％)caring about appearance．They prefer to choose those with beautiful faces and slim figures as their good friends．

　　I don’t think a good friend has to be beautiful or handsome．I think honesty is the most important．…

　　[評(píng)分說(shuō)明]

　　1．本題總分為15分，按5個(gè)檔次給分。

　　2．評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來(lái)衡量、確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。

　　3、詞數(shù)少于規(guī)定詞數(shù)20詞以上者，扣1分。

　　4、未寫(xiě)自己觀點(diǎn)的，扣2分。

　　5、評(píng)分時(shí)應(yīng)注意：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、運(yùn)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的準(zhǔn)備性及上下文的連貫性、單詞拼寫(xiě)的準(zhǔn)確性。

　　各檔次的給分范圍和要求：

　　第五檔：(15－13分)

　　完全符合題目要求，表達(dá)清楚，內(nèi)容豐富。使用多種語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和豐富的詞匯，語(yǔ)言通順，語(yǔ)意連貫，具有邏輯性。允許有個(gè)別語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。

　　第四檔：(12－10分)

　　符合題目要求，表達(dá)基本清楚，內(nèi)容完整。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯基本滿足文章需要。語(yǔ)言基本通順，語(yǔ)意基本連貫。有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，但不影響整體理解。

　　第三檔：(9－7分)

　　表達(dá)不夠清楚，內(nèi)容不夠完整，但尚能達(dá)意。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯錯(cuò)誤較多，語(yǔ)言不通順，影響整體理解。

　　第二檔：(6－4分)

　　與題目有關(guān)的內(nèi)容不多，不能表達(dá)出基本要點(diǎn)。只是簡(jiǎn)單拼湊，所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容難以理解。

　　第一檔：(3－0分)

　　白卷或文不對(duì)題或不知所云。只能寫(xiě)出與內(nèi)容有關(guān)的一些單詞。