Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

近年來霧霾天氣（haze）越來越嚴(yán)重。請(qǐng)就此話題寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

內(nèi)容提示：

1.因?yàn)殪F霾天氣，學(xué)生的戶外活動(dòng)比以前少了；

2.人們不得不戴面罩（mask）出行, 道路上也發(fā)生了更多交通事故；

3.空氣污染問題嚴(yán)重，不利于健康；

4.每個(gè)人都應(yīng)該采取措施來保護(hù)環(huán)境。例如……

注意：

1.短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，不必逐句翻譯，要求語句通順、意思連貫；

2.第4個(gè)要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容須適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3.短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

These years the haze weather appears more and more often. ________________________

Answer 1

【答案】These years the haze weather appears more and more often. Because of the haze weather, students have fewer outdoor activities than before.

People have to wear masks when they go out. Also, there are more traffic accidents on the road.

Air pollution has become a serious problem. It is bad for our health. Everyone should take action to protect the environment. For example, we can change our life style. We can ride bikes or take buses when we go out. I plan to plant more trees in the future.

【解析】本篇作文叫小作者介紹霧霾天氣的嚴(yán)重危害，小作者首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。如Air pollution has become a serious problem. It is bad for our health. Everyone should take action to protect the environment.等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。