Question

11．假設(shè)你是大明，你的筆友給你來信了．請(qǐng)閱讀以下來信，并根據(jù)內(nèi)容寫一封回信．
要求：1.80詞左右；2．文中不要出現(xiàn)作者本人的真實(shí)信息．

Dear Daming， I'd like to tell you something about my"important gift"．It was a beautiful smile． When I was nine years old，I went to a new school．As a result，no one knew who I was．I felt lonely．Then one day when I sat at my desk unhappily as usual，a girl walked to me and smiled． Though she said no words，I felt the touch of something bright and friendly and it made me feel happy and warm again．After that she became my good friend． As we all know，everybody may feel lonely or be in trouble．Could you tell me something about your"important gift"that touched you or changed your life？ Yours， Susan

Dear Susan，
I'm glad to read your letter and your"important gift"really touches me．As for me，my"important gift"was my mum's sad tears．
Two years ago，I became a"problem child"，and I was tired of everything．I did everything that was against my parents．That made my mum very sad，but she still loved me as usual．
One night，I lost my reason and broke a glass，which caused my mum to burst into tears．All at once，her sadness touched my deep heart．Since
then，I have completely changed myself．
Best wishes，
Daming．

Answer 1

分析 本題是一篇根據(jù)來信寫回信的作文，格式是書信，但是前后文已經(jīng)給出，所以格式不用注意了．根據(jù)Susan的來信內(nèi)容可以知道，她是講了令自己感動(dòng)的一件事，并且要回答你有沒有令你覺得很感動(dòng)的"important gift"，所以回信主要是要說清楚自己收到的"important gift"，時(shí)態(tài)要以一般過去時(shí)為主，人稱用第一人稱．

解答 Dear Susan，
  I'm glad to read your letter and your"important gift"really touches me．As for me，my"important gift"was my mum's sad tears．
  Two years ago，I became a"problem child"，and I was tired of everything．I did everything that was against my parents．That made my mum very sad，but she still loved me as usual．
  One night，I lost my reason and broke a glass，which caused my mum to burst into tears．All at once，her sadness touched my deep heart．Since then，I have completely changed myself．
  Best wishes，
Daming．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇給材料作文，短文的開頭已經(jīng)給出．本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)需要從來信中提取，因此動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀來信內(nèi)容，然后圍繞這些要點(diǎn)組織材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容，注意不要偏離文章中心．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，并且讓上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系．