Question

18．"中國(guó)夢(mèng)"代表每個(gè)中國(guó)人的夢(mèng)想．作為中學(xué)生，你對(duì)未來有怎樣的憧憬？對(duì)人生又怎樣的期盼？請(qǐng)你圍繞"夢(mèng)想"這一話題，根據(jù)提示信息寫一篇英語短文．
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示：
1．我的夢(mèng)想是什么？
2．我為什么有這樣的夢(mèng)想？
3．我將怎樣實(shí)現(xiàn)我的夢(mèng)想？
要求：
1．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、地名和校名．
2．包含提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
3.80詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)．
4．提示詞匯：achieve one's dream，hold on to，difficulty，give up
China dreams are made up of all Chinese people's dreams．As a middle school student，what's my dream？
                                
If everyone does so，I strongly believe our China dreams must come true and China will get better and better．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Teachers can not teach us many things at school，①but they②do their best to teach us③how to learn．
①but表轉(zhuǎn)折，連接前后兩個(gè)句子．
②do one's best to do sth 竭盡全力做某事
③how to learn，是疑問詞+to do 結(jié)構(gòu)，作為teach的賓語．
【高分句型二】
I know①②it is not easy to make my dream come true．
①省略了that的賓語從句，作為know的賓語．
②it is+adj+to do sth做某事是怎么樣的．it是形式主語，動(dòng)詞不定式是真正主語．

解答 China dreams are made up of all Chinese people's dreams．As a middle school student，what's my dream？
My dream is to become a teacher．（點(diǎn)題）Teachers can not teach us many things at school，but they do their best to teach us how to learn．【高分句型一】Thanks to them，we learn knowledge．And at the same time，we learn how to live a happy life．They spend most time on their students．They are great in my eyes．
I hope to be a teacher because I admire teachers．（為什么會(huì)有這樣的夢(mèng)想）I know it is not easy to make my dream come true．【高分句型二】But I decide to study harder from now on．（怎樣實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想）I am sure my dream will come true．（總結(jié)全文）
If everyone does so，I strongly believe our China dreams must come true and China will get better and better．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇提綱作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個(gè)基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語、短語和句型，以充分地表達(dá)文章的內(nèi)容．盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語或句型來表述具體的內(nèi)容，避免使用無把握或偏、難句型．注意所寫句子要符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．