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11．2012年5月8日晚，一張高三男生教室內(nèi)集體半裸苦讀照片迅速在微博上爆紅．畫面中18名男子留著短發(fā)，穿著短褲，全部赤膊上陣．更有意思的是，明亮的夜燈，留著白色粉筆字的黑板，看起來嶄新的桌椅標著"五中 305"．那些半裸男學(xué)生個個集中精力，持筆埋頭在書本中…
請根據(jù)圖片和文字提示寫一篇短文，談?wù)勛约旱母惺埽�分析一下他們刻苦學(xué)習(xí)的理由，再結(jié)合自己的實際生活談?wù)劷窈蟮拇蛩悖?br />               ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
In order to get good grades，I have to stay up late and get up early．
句中使用短語有："in order to do sth 為了做某事"、"stay up 熬夜"、"get up 起床"．這句話意為：為了取得好成績，我不得不熬夜很晚、起來很早．
高分句型二：
The harder I work，the better I will become．
句中為比較級的特殊用法"the+比較級，the+比較級"，意為"越…，越…"．這句話意為：我越努力，我會變得越好．

解答 Look at this picture，there are eighteen shirtless students in the classroom．They are writing carefully．How hard they study!（敘述圖片內(nèi)容）
Now the students are bearing a heavy learning load．Their parents always ask them to go to a famous school．They are under increasing pressure．So they  have to try their best to work hard to get better grades．（分析學(xué)生的狀態(tài)）
When I saw this picture，I felt a little sad．I am just like the students in this picture．In order to get good grades，I have to stay up late and get up early．【高分句型二】However，it is necessary to do so．No pains，no gains．The harder I work，the better I will become．【高分句型二】So I will try my best．（我的感想）

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