Question

3．假如你家里有多口人，現(xiàn)在是晚上七點(diǎn)鐘，請展開想象，用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)描寫一下家里每個(gè)人在做的事情，不少于60個(gè)詞，開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．還應(yīng)該寫提示詞以外的內(nèi)容．
It is 7：00 o'clock now．Everyone in my family is very busy．
I am playing the guitar．It's relaxing．Look!Frank is doing his homework．He is good at schoolwork and he is always the top in his class．My father is reading a book!He likes reading，he says it's interesting．My mother is cleaning the room．she is hard-working．My grandmother is watching TV and having some fruit．Where is my sister，Mary？Oh，she is playing computer games．She plays everyday．My little cat is playing with a ball．We have a good time．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Look!Frank is doing his homework你看，弗蘭克在做作業(yè)．
look表示提醒別人注意．
【高分句型二】
Where is his sister，Mary？他的姐姐瑪麗在哪里．
特殊疑問句的使用．

解答 It is 7：00 o'clock now．Everyone in my family is very busy．I am playing the guitar．It's relaxing．Look!Frank is doing his homework．He is good at schoolwork and he is always the top in his class（弗蘭克在做作業(yè)）．【高分句型一】My father is reading a book!He likes reading，he says it's interesting．My  mother is cleaning the room．she is hard-working．My grandmother is watching TV and having some fruit．（爸爸和媽媽，奶奶在做什么）Where is my sister，Mary？【高分句型二】Oh，she is playing computer games．She plays everyday．（瑪麗在玩電腦）My little cat is playing with a ball．We have a good time．

點(diǎn)評 這篇作文要求我們以題目中的要求為背景，介紹一下此時(shí)此刻家庭成員都在做些什么．題目中利用表格的形式，給我們列出了一個(gè)寫作的簡要的提綱，我們應(yīng)使用正確的英語將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，另外，還需根據(jù)情景的需要，補(bǔ)充適當(dāng)?shù)膬?nèi)容，以使短文的內(nèi)容更加豐富、完整．通過分析可知，這篇短文介紹的是7點(diǎn)鐘時(shí)，家里的人正在做什么，因此這篇短文應(yīng)使用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)態(tài)，即be+現(xiàn)在分詞的形式，根據(jù)主語的變化，使用正確的be動(dòng)詞的形式，同時(shí)動(dòng)詞應(yīng)變?yōu)樗�的現(xiàn)在分詞，要注意形式的正確．寫作時(shí)，可以使用一些好的句型和短語，增強(qiáng)文章的表現(xiàn)力．