Question

14．假如你是李華，初中生活即將結(jié)束，在步人商中學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)之際，你思緒萬千．請你根據(jù)下面表格的提示，寫-封信表達(dá)你對父母的由衷感激及今后的點滴回報．
提示：

父母為我	生活的照顧	飲食起居
	精神的支持	交友、學(xué)習(xí)、壓力
我為父母	感恩，陪伴、現(xiàn)解父母

注意：1．內(nèi)容必須包含表格中所提供的所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
2．詞數(shù)：80-100同．（開頭和結(jié)尾部分已紿出．不計人總詞數(shù)．）
3．文中不能出現(xiàn)學(xué)生真實姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱．
Dear Mom/Dad，
My Junior school life is coming to an end．Now，I'd like to show my thanks to you for your devotion to me these years． 
                                           
Yours love，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Every day．you were the first one to get up and prepare breakfast for me．每天你是第一個起床，為我準(zhǔn)備早餐．
the first one to do sth第一個做某事的人
【高分句型二】
I'll spend more time staying and communicating with you．我將花費更多時間跟你在一起，跟你溝通交流．
spend…doing sth花費…做某事；communicate with sb 和某人交流

解答 Dear Mom，
My Junior school life is coming to an end．Now，I'd like to show my thanks to you for your devotion to me these years．Since I was born．you have been taking good care of me．Every day．you were the first one to get up and prepare breakfast for me．【高分句型一】On my way to and from school，you were always with me．When I failed in the tests and felt stressed，you were the one to encourage me．When I didn't get along well with my friends，you always taught me how to make friends with others．
Now，I have grown up．I'll spend more time staying and communicating with you．【高分句型二】
And I'll try my best to understand you and do what I can for you．
Yours，
Li Hua

點評 做英語書面表達(dá)時，只要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復(fù)合句．最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤．