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4．一曲《時(shí)間都去哪了》唱紅了春晚，引起很多人的共鳴，讓我們感受到時(shí)光飛逝．三年的初中生活即將結(jié)束，你與老師和同學(xué)之間有很多美好的回憶．請寫一件難忘的事．
要求：
1．詞數(shù)：80詞左右．
2．字跡工整，語言流暢，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，邏輯清晰．
3．文章內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮
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Answer 1

分析 本篇作文是一篇記敘文，要求考生圍繞三年初中生活寫一件難忘的事情，應(yīng)注意以下幾個(gè)方面：1．文章可按總分總結(jié)構(gòu)去寫，第一段介紹難忘的人或事，第二段詳細(xì)來描述這件難忘的事情，第三段可寫自己的感受祝愿等.2．在對現(xiàn)在事情進(jìn)行描述時(shí)應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，在回憶難忘的事情時(shí)應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí)，在寫祝愿等可用一般將來時(shí)；3．人稱應(yīng)以第一人稱和第三人稱為主.4．字?jǐn)?shù)80詞左右，表達(dá)要準(zhǔn)確，語言要流暢．
寫作常用短語句型：
come to an end 即將結(jié)束
There are so many wonderful memories that I can't forget．有許多美好的回憶，我不能忘記．
I will always remember my friend Tom who is a friendly and kind boy．（定語從句）我將會永遠(yuǎn)記住我的朋友湯姆，他是一個(gè)友好善良的男孩．
as a result 結(jié)果
It was Tom who helped me with my schoolwork after school every day．（強(qiáng)調(diào)句）是湯姆每天放學(xué)后幫助我補(bǔ)習(xí)功課．
not only…but also…不僅…而且…
cheer sb．up 使某人振作起來
Whenever you are in need，I will always be here for you．不管何時(shí)你需要我，我一直會在這里．
What a great friend!多么好的一個(gè)朋友！
say goodbye to sb．對某人說再見

解答 Our life in middle school will come to an end soon．There are so many wonderful memories that I can't forget．I will always remmember my friend Tom who is a friendly and kind boy．
Once，my legs was badly hurt when I played football during the sports meeting．As a result，I had to stay in bed for one month at home．However，the mid-term exam was coming，so I was very worried．At that time，it was Tom who helped me with my schoolwork after school every day．He not only explained my questionsvery carefully but also told jokes to cheer me up．Finally，I passed the exam successfully．When I expressed my great thanks to him，Tom just smiled，"Whenever you are in need，I will always be here for you．"What a great friend！
At this every moment I will say goodbye to him，but I will never forget our friendship，I will give him my best wishes．

點(diǎn)評 本文是一篇記敘文，寫作話題是關(guān)于初中三年生活中一件難忘的事，考生應(yīng)認(rèn)真審題，確定寫作內(nèi)容，注意在描述難忘的事情時(shí)內(nèi)容要具體充實(shí)，體現(xiàn)主題．其次語句要準(zhǔn)確和連貫，多用寫作時(shí)常用的亮點(diǎn)詞匯句型，使文章讀起來更加流暢．最后注意人稱時(shí)態(tài)的正確使用，寫完仔細(xì)檢查單詞的正確書寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)等細(xì)節(jié)問題．